Recent Comments

LongtimeFan
4/5/18, 11:33 AM
Hi! Wanted to congratulate you on a great first story! :) There are a few grammatical errors—mostly capitalization and punctuation, plus a few awkward shifts into the present tense—but the story itself is solid, and you do a great job capturing the paranoia/lust combo. Plus you found a great way to give a character description without it feeling forced! Awesome job. :)
LongtimeFan
4/5/18, 11:27 AM
WOW! Super-exciting chapter. I love the world you paint with your words (especially your descriptions of the Bulgified boys’ bubble butts...). But what’s even more interesting is the moral ambiguity. Yes, the reporters are “good guys” and I want to see them win, but at the same time, Anthony’s single-minded desire to solve the case is causing a lot of trouble. Can’t wait to see what happens next!
Me
4/5/18, 9:14 AM
Holy cow that was amazing, very exciting but I really hope you continue this hehe some many people here abandon their stories and I have a thing for forced and rubber so This hits where I like it ^^
TheGerman
4/5/18, 8:53 AM
I'm not necessarily a big fan of alien stories but sometimes I like to read them. I like the fact that the boys are feeling the rubbery surface of the Synpax on their skin during sex. I would prefer if the Synpax hadn’t invited the boys but kidnapped them. But the author can and of course should write down his own fantasies.
Anonymous
4/5/18, 8:47 AM
Thats hot for the 1st chapter! Cant wait for follow up
HyperMuscleMonster
4/5/18, 7:51 AM
Not bad, a bit abrupt, but typical for your style. You did wander in the writing, accidentally shifting to first person a couple times. May want to watch and/or fix that.
4/5/18, 4:58 AM
Great story.
Anonymous
4/5/18, 4:52 AM
Soooooo hawt
Anonymous
4/5/18, 4:10 AM
Interesting!!
Anonymous
4/5/18, 4:10 AM
Excellent!!