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Null0byte
4/5/18, 4:43 PM
To the ‘anon’ comment immediately above mine: You will get over yourself right now. Your comment was condescending and the opposite of constructive; your weak attempt to be “encouraging” at the end has the effect of being the opposite of doing so. I think the best part is that you don’t even have the courage to at least put an identifying handle on it. If that is the kind of feedback you wish to give people let’s see you put up a story for all to read. Better yet, just don’t comment. If you have any specific feedback to give the author, you can always send them an email with your feedback instead of anonymous condescension in public. He even asked for people to do just that, which is laudable. Part of writing and editing is that many times you need to have more than one pair of eyes on it as the writer will tend to read it as he or she means it in their head, rather than exactly what they put down on paper.
AeonFlux
4/5/18, 4:37 PM
Never mind post at 15:54 The story is very hot and if some people want to criticise they should buy a book from the store........ this is a site to write and share our deepdown fantasies Please keep on writing........
Anonymous
4/5/18, 4:04 PM
Great story!! Loved it!!
Anonymous
4/5/18, 4:03 PM
I agree!! Really hot! Loved the pics.
Anonymous
4/5/18, 3:55 PM
Great story!! Loved it!!
Anonymous
4/5/18, 3:54 PM
SBD89 Did you learn from this experience that 'writing' is not the same as 'coming up with a story'? The story you tried to write is great, and has the potential for follow-up. The writing part was awful. All you had to do is run the spell and grammar check on your word processor (presumably MSWord) and all the wrong caps and horrible grammar would be corrected in a couple of minutes. Writing requires editing, and sometimes more time spent editing than writing. Keep writing -- and editing. We want to read a well-crafted, well-written story.
Anonymous
4/5/18, 3:46 PM
I give you credit for developing episodic stories that make sense and make you want to read more. I'm loving this series. Smart and sexy!!!
Anonymous
4/5/18, 2:47 PM
Excellent
Max
4/5/18, 2:12 PM
Hmmmm. Just re-read the ending. Has Cameron already fallen under Bulge's influence more deeply, or is Anthony just more conscious of his partners hot body and hard cock now that his reprogramming has begun? ;-P Love the suspense. And the reference to the master "plotting their punishments"!
Will
4/5/18, 2:02 PM
Oh fuck yes, please can you write a second chapter?! 😍