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Anonymous
4/5/18, 3:54 PM
SBD89 Did you learn from this experience that 'writing' is not the same as 'coming up with a story'? The story you tried to write is great, and has the potential for follow-up. The writing part was awful. All you had to do is run the spell and grammar check on your word processor (presumably MSWord) and all the wrong caps and horrible grammar would be corrected in a couple of minutes. Writing requires editing, and sometimes more time spent editing than writing. Keep writing -- and editing. We want to read a well-crafted, well-written story.
Anonymous
4/5/18, 3:46 PM
I give you credit for developing episodic stories that make sense and make you want to read more. I'm loving this series. Smart and sexy!!!
Anonymous
4/5/18, 2:47 PM
Excellent
Max
4/5/18, 2:12 PM
Hmmmm. Just re-read the ending. Has Cameron already fallen under Bulge's influence more deeply, or is Anthony just more conscious of his partners hot body and hard cock now that his reprogramming has begun? ;-P Love the suspense. And the reference to the master "plotting their punishments"!
Will
4/5/18, 2:02 PM
Oh fuck yes, please can you write a second chapter?! 😍
4/5/18, 1:57 PM
Thank you guys for your kind words :). I have a pretty good idea, where i want this to go. I hope you guys Enjoy it. I'm writing the next part now. So should be up soon.
Anonymous
4/5/18, 1:35 PM
Another HOT chapter to read. Love the big dicks of the bulgified men and all the muscle. Getting them hypnotized and Anthony sucking Cameron without them remembering was a good plot twist. Looking forward to more Bulges !
Max
4/5/18, 1:05 PM
Great continuation and setup. The plot thickens as our intrepid reporters are unaware that their reprogramming has already begun. Despite all their precautions, their old lives are already being systematically erased. And what will their new lives be like after their Bulge indoctrination is completed? I can't wait to see! I expect their planned undercover visit to Bulges will not go exactly as planned but I think they will enjoy it. I was especially interested to see Anthony's take-charge personality so quickly melt away into a submissive one towards his partner. Hope the difference in their body types/sizes comes into play with their transformations. Love it!
Anonymous
4/5/18, 12:10 PM
It's getting better every time Thrilled to see it continue
Anonymous
4/5/18, 12:03 PM
love the twisted way the final alteration completely seals their fate