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4/5/18, 3:31 AM
Excellent!!
Anonymous
4/5/18, 1:48 AM
interesting
Max
4/5/18, 1:41 AM
Thanks for all your hard work, Bleuboy! Writers block is rough but your work just gets better and better. Can't wait to see what is in store for our intrepid investigative journalists! ;-)
bleuboy
4/5/18, 1:33 AM
I mean Anthony, haha whoops :P
bleuboy
4/5/18, 1:32 AM
That you all for the feedback! I'm glad you all like the tale I've woven. I've had writers block for the couple of months since I posted Chapter 2 and have been wondering how to proceed further. I've just submitted part 2 of Chapter 3 and I think I have two or three more parts left to tie everything into a close. The fates of Cameron and Alex will be precarious indeed, that much I can assure ;)
Max
4/5/18, 12:36 AM
That was very hot. Love the idea of turning them into such cocksuckers it makes them lisp, and as their voices are changed their identities permanently change into twinkified cocksuckers as well.
Anonymous
4/4/18, 11:18 PM
Please write more!!!
Anonymous
4/4/18, 11:13 PM
You need more... please....perhaps a rugby team, basketball team, too?? Soccer? :)
Anonymous
4/4/18, 10:23 PM
When's the next chapter coming?
Anonymous
4/4/18, 9:45 PM
Really hot!