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9/29/24, 3:09 AM
I enjoyed it so much. THANK YOU. I especially loved the sweat, power struggles... all the persuasion and the seduction. WELL WRITTEN and WOW!
mbblover
9/17/24, 6:30 PM
please, please continue more chapters! Can't wait to read how eventually a whole orgy of gay older beta's (not attractive or built) menat the same time, the orgy to end all orgies, take down brandon sexually and mentally for all time sake, and truly short circuit his brain and former straight sexuality forevermore... captured, conquered and converted! works for me! laugh!... have you wrote any superhero captured, conquered and converted stories??

9/29/24, 2:51 AM
@mbblover Hey mbblover, I have that planned but it will take some time for that orgy to materialize. Brandon's not manipulated to that point yet lol I havent written any superhero stories yet but that's an interesting angle :P However I am writing a current sword and sorcery series and the latest chapter has our young warrior Jawbreaker bound and subjected to some erotic machinations.
9/28/24, 10:02 PM
Great series of events unfolding here. Intertwined in the series, you are drawn into the subtle changes Brandon goes through. You feel a bit guilty enjoying the slow manipulation. Trust me being a proud Gooner . I rarely rate stories this is incredible! Great job Mate!

9/29/24, 2:46 AM
@[Harley](/user/show/1589547) Hi Harley, thank you for your high praise indeed! I am truly thankful you understand my vision and intention for these stories. I'm really not interested in the one-off wham bam thank you sir sex stories and you are absolutely right in that I want each chapter to highlight subtle changes because of the manipulation by all the perverted old men around our hero. Like I always say, smut is way more erotic with a rich context and I like my stories to tease and edge, which as a Gooner you would appreciate :P May I interest you in my [patreon](https://www.patreon.com/JockCummings) if you want more released chapters and lots of further conversations (I have dropped almost 20 chapters of Brandon's story and another sword and sorcery one if that's your thing). No pressure! Thank you once again for rating and commenting. It means a lot! :)
9/29/24, 2:26 AM
It a great series, but I was really turned off that a sex slave mater would take someone’s son away. Only an evil master would do that. You already took everything else from them mentally . No need to take away a real son from his father. That made me so sad that he erased both their minds of each other. Yeah just plain sad. It’s like he did it to punish the dad for turning the son back for that kiss leaving the shower after he called the son over.
9/29/24, 1:07 AM
Nice read
9/29/24, 1:03 AM
That ending. Zipper? I’m still into Nick. It’s a good story that has a few more twist coming. Daedalus I will have to do some research into. It seems like the place to be on campus. Ray is lost. Maybe nick can drag him to the light as the story continues. I also have to go to the gym, these hot jocks you create seem to visit there. :) Can’t wait for more. :)
9/29/24, 12:56 AM
I’m late. Sorry for missing this tale. This is a darker story from you. I like it. I like a lot of your writings. I hope we see more mischievous things in the future. Who knew you had this in you? I did. :) Henry. 😩
9/28/24, 11:00 PM
I thought Joe was going to be Patrok’s life partner. He seems to love him. Or maybe it was a commander crush.
Anonymous
9/28/24, 9:49 PM
I would like to get hold of that kryptonite loosing my gag reflex and go nonstop ock after cock.. I have been a cocksucker all of my life and a successful one but I can always do better... Most I have ever done in one night is 40 without the kryptonite.
9/28/24, 9:33 PM
I know you were working on this chapter for a long time, Charlie, so I'm really glad to see it published so others can enjoy it! Justin and Monty's relationship is really beginning to flourish, and Monty is such a himbo you can't help but love him even through his more thickheaded moments. Great job, Charlie!