Recent Comments

Anonymous
4/2/18, 10:35 PM
Wonderful Great work
Anonymous
4/2/18, 4:38 PM
Looking forward to the third part! Very hot story.
4/2/18, 3:10 PM
great stories m8, love em, love to chat with you blufdude @aol.com
AeonFlux
4/2/18, 10:45 AM
Sehr geile Idee..........bin schon sehr gespannt, was da noch alles kommt........schreib weiter
Bmax
4/2/18, 7:12 AM
Love the rear zipper especially
Mar 30, 2018
Anonymous
4/2/18, 6:11 AM
Was a bit confused..it was like multiple stories put together? Either way I shot a huge load ;)
null0byte
4/2/18, 5:39 AM
I apologize, I forgot to address this in the last comment: Yes, I'm very much interested in the next chapter. Please continue.
null0byte
4/2/18, 5:32 AM
I like how right after this story of "The German" was a story in...German. Having said that, this was a pretty well written story. The prose was a bit, well, stiff, like some others have said. Id I didn't know any better I would say it was translated from...well...German. Still, it was a well-written story. I edit many things for many people, and this was well written.
null0byte
4/2/18, 5:19 AM
But...but...but...why am I a horrible person? I thought you guys were enjoying the story the author wrote; taking you in and out and in and out of the tingling narrative. Did you not enjoy the burst of emotion upon the climax of this chapter? Did you not feel the warm glow when the protagonist accepted his intruder into his warm (and squishy given the scene) embrace? I'm not sure I can write a story worth of you all, pundulating with innuendo enough to satiate you all in your ravenous hunger. I'm not sure I have the stamina to keep you all on edge enough to be rewarded with the pearly milk of success without being sentenced to the punitentiary. I mean, precious few things inspire me to explode with possibilities. I wouldn't want to milk it, afterall...
Anonymous
4/2/18, 12:55 AM
Hopefully the revenge wish included that RA, who is now begging the whole dorm for sex...