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Anonymous
4/5/18, 8:47 AM
Thats hot for the 1st chapter! Cant wait for follow up
HyperMuscleMonster
4/5/18, 7:51 AM
Not bad, a bit abrupt, but typical for your style. You did wander in the writing, accidentally shifting to first person a couple times. May want to watch and/or fix that.
4/5/18, 4:58 AM
Great story.
Anonymous
4/5/18, 4:52 AM
Soooooo hawt
Anonymous
4/5/18, 4:10 AM
Interesting!!
Anonymous
4/5/18, 4:10 AM
Excellent!!
Anonymous
4/5/18, 3:36 AM
So amazing! Please write more
4/5/18, 3:31 AM
Excellent!!
Anonymous
4/5/18, 1:48 AM
interesting
Max
4/5/18, 1:41 AM
Thanks for all your hard work, Bleuboy! Writers block is rough but your work just gets better and better. Can't wait to see what is in store for our intrepid investigative journalists! ;-)