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4/1/18, 6:12 PM
One of them just *felt* like years; the other one actually was.
Anonymous
4/1/18, 5:14 PM
This is really amazing!
Jul 29, 2015
Anonymous
4/1/18, 4:39 PM
fucking hot
Swizzington
4/1/18, 4:18 PM
Thank you for following up and continuing this series! I really enjoy this type of story. Perhaps it was explained in the first chapter and I just can't remember, but has it been explained why different boys would wear different styles and colors of uniform?
Jesus
4/1/18, 1:48 PM
Formally Jay Gold .My friends made me Jesus Christian Gonzalez Jr today Easter Sunday as I officially was baptised and changed from a white Gringo Jew into a Catholic Latino like my dad was.I can so relate to this story.
Anonymous
4/1/18, 12:48 PM
Good story but the phase pun doesn't quite work, because the first time you use it, it should be "faze". (A common misspelling on this site.)
4/1/18, 11:40 AM
Glad to hear you like this one! I did have done concerns about it. I was tossing up about whether or not to have Jack and Bill be twins, or just friends. In the end I decided that it was a story about hot guys being compelled to eat each others holes while dressed in skimpy bunny outfits (and love it), and so with that in mind what's a little twincest on the top? As for how the others wound up in their predicaments, that I'm not even sure about. Unless I think of a fun progression for them I think I'll just chalk it up as an Easter miracle, helped along by some costume-appropriate mind-control headwear.
Anonymous
4/1/18, 9:20 AM
Really really good! Really love this direction.
TheGerman
4/1/18, 9:11 AM
Ich kommentiere dann einfach mal in Deutsch, weil die Story ja so geschrieben wurde ;-) Mir gefällt der Erzählstil, wie einiges ziemlich detailliert beschrieben ist. Er verlangt dem Leser auch ein bisschen was ab, weil die zeitliche Reihenfolge nicht immer genau vorangeht und das Geschehen aus unterschiedlichen Perspektiven erzählt wird. Letzteres führt zu Wiederholungen der Geschehnisse, was sie verstärkt. Dankenswerterweise auch bei der Chloroform-Szene. Ich liebe so ein Szenario, kann gar nicht genug von einer Beschreibung dessen bekommen. Die Zahlen erleichtern natürlich das Erkennen der Perspektivwechsel. Noch ist von Gedankenkontrolle nicht wirklich etwas zu lesen, doch das ist ja auch erst der Anfang der Story. Ich bin sicher, die wird sich gut entwickeln.
Anonymous
4/1/18, 3:39 AM
Now I want to see the others' tranfomations.