Recent Comments

4/1/18, 11:40 AM
Glad to hear you like this one! I did have done concerns about it. I was tossing up about whether or not to have Jack and Bill be twins, or just friends. In the end I decided that it was a story about hot guys being compelled to eat each others holes while dressed in skimpy bunny outfits (and love it), and so with that in mind what's a little twincest on the top? As for how the others wound up in their predicaments, that I'm not even sure about. Unless I think of a fun progression for them I think I'll just chalk it up as an Easter miracle, helped along by some costume-appropriate mind-control headwear.
Anonymous
4/1/18, 9:20 AM
Really really good! Really love this direction.
TheGerman
4/1/18, 9:11 AM
Ich kommentiere dann einfach mal in Deutsch, weil die Story ja so geschrieben wurde ;-) Mir gefällt der Erzählstil, wie einiges ziemlich detailliert beschrieben ist. Er verlangt dem Leser auch ein bisschen was ab, weil die zeitliche Reihenfolge nicht immer genau vorangeht und das Geschehen aus unterschiedlichen Perspektiven erzählt wird. Letzteres führt zu Wiederholungen der Geschehnisse, was sie verstärkt. Dankenswerterweise auch bei der Chloroform-Szene. Ich liebe so ein Szenario, kann gar nicht genug von einer Beschreibung dessen bekommen. Die Zahlen erleichtern natürlich das Erkennen der Perspektivwechsel. Noch ist von Gedankenkontrolle nicht wirklich etwas zu lesen, doch das ist ja auch erst der Anfang der Story. Ich bin sicher, die wird sich gut entwickeln.
Anonymous
4/1/18, 3:39 AM
Now I want to see the others' tranfomations.
AUK
4/1/18, 3:39 AM
Nice start now lets see what happens next.
Anonymous
4/1/18, 3:38 AM
I found this to be very hot and well written.
Mar 30, 2018
Anonymous
4/1/18, 3:37 AM
Original premise! I love the Antiques Roadshow reference! Who KNOWS what neat features antique Oscar has?!
Anonymous
4/1/18, 2:57 AM
English is a little stiff, but it’s still very descriptive and hot! Can’t wait for the next part! Nothing hotter than a victim cumming against his will.
Cumluvnbottom@yahoo.com
4/1/18, 12:07 AM
Great writing, great fantasy, great sex. The only thing that threw me a bit... so Nathan / Nate spent years in the “gym world” beefing up and having sex with the trainers (and a book... which was hot btw) and then came back and spent years having sex with Sam? Or am I misunderstanding something? Thinking of sections like: “By the time Sam and Nate had gotten through the years of makeouts and the years of oral sex and found themselves ready for some serious fucking,...”
3/31/18, 11:28 PM
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