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Tass
3/31/18, 10:59 PM
Great Plot, well written can‘t Waisen for more. Perhaps some Body mods - tattoo Sand Piercings - for Mark
Anonymous
3/31/18, 10:58 PM
Interesting. Will he be a drone or will his mind be changed so he willingly obeys?
3/31/18, 9:03 PM
Quite hot. Love the 'everything here is fine' and the motif of the bunny ears leading to the changes. I also liked the buttplay. Very hot. :)
Anonymous
3/31/18, 8:57 PM
GREAT STORY
Anonymous
3/31/18, 7:58 PM
Very clever!! Like the Welsh as an alien language. Funny!!
Anonymous
3/31/18, 4:26 PM
Nice! This was a hot beginning to your story. Your English is fine; just the occasional problem with the subjunctive (always hard!) and the declensions on a few adverbs and adjectives. Not a big deal. Still very easy to understand. If you want me to edit the next part before you post it, let me know. Otherwise, no worries. It was great!
Anonymous
3/31/18, 3:37 PM
Please continue
Martin
3/31/18, 3:36 PM
Darmani has written up long and interesting comment on this series on the forum, which you might find interesting. Check it out: http://forum.gayspiralstories.com/t/regarding-belials-legacy/410
Anonymous
3/31/18, 3:13 PM
Awesome story! I agree make him remember who he was, and force him to obey and slowly love his torment. Looking forward to more.
Anonymous
3/31/18, 3:07 PM
EXCELLENT!!I would love to make the suffering and process last. Love the internal conflict and mental conflict,