Recent Comments

Martin
3/31/18, 3:36 PM
Darmani has written up long and interesting comment on this series on the forum, which you might find interesting. Check it out: http://forum.gayspiralstories.com/t/regarding-belials-legacy/410
Anonymous
3/31/18, 3:13 PM
Awesome story! I agree make him remember who he was, and force him to obey and slowly love his torment. Looking forward to more.
Anonymous
3/31/18, 3:07 PM
EXCELLENT!!I would love to make the suffering and process last. Love the internal conflict and mental conflict,
Anonymous
3/31/18, 2:43 PM
Great start! Looking forward to the next chapter.
Anonymous
3/31/18, 2:12 PM
Great job
Anonymous
3/31/18, 1:26 PM
Cute!
Anonymous
3/31/18, 1:26 PM
Great story! Looking forward to more :) Would be hot to see Matt retain his macho jock persona, just clueless to the protagonist's wishes/commands
David S
3/31/18, 12:12 PM
While reading this, I had no idea English was not your first language. You write better than a lot of native English speakers! Hope to read more of this hot story! Thank you!
Anonymous
3/31/18, 11:56 AM
Nice premise, especially since English isn't your first language. Kinda hot but if I can suggest something, try taking inspiration from Mind Break doujin from Sorairo Panda (Yamome). Even though you can't read the dialogue, you can have a general flow of the story.
Steamed Hams
3/31/18, 9:01 AM
@whoever asked, the reference is to a video called "Steamed Hams" and it's a clip from the Simpsons