Recent Comments

Anonymous
3/31/18, 3:52 AM
Hot!!!
Mar 30, 2018
Anonymous
3/31/18, 3:27 AM
Damn this story is so fucking hot. Could barely make it half way through before cumming.
Anonymous
3/31/18, 3:25 AM
That was so hot, I love disproportional men
Anonymous
3/31/18, 2:51 AM
Awesome story bro!!
Anonymous
3/31/18, 2:19 AM
Over all very good hoping another chapter follows curious as to how his family made its money
Anonymous
3/31/18, 2:11 AM
Love how Jean-luc and Gervais is 110% gay now
Mar 30, 2018
Anonymous
3/31/18, 1:03 AM
well... that scaleted quickly
Anonymous
3/30/18, 10:25 PM
"Double zeros are a wash" with dice? Otherwise very nice.
3/30/18, 10:03 PM
Ack didn't praisethis enough you attention to setting, specifics, and detail make the entire story POP. The set ups and peices, consideration of wear, the literary/histoical references or allusions and the just right play to the audience. I'm ALMOSt disappointed with some of the brief descriptions of the players BUT you do well and serve the flow of words and narratives and events better where you conserve. Again some great scenes, from the Prior's seduction, Wat's introduction and taking (doing more than one thing for the story at once), the introduction and development of the characters and the 'lore' worldbuilding. All great things. Its so well made I take the good you're doing with just raw ingredients for granted like sitting down to a nice movie or television broadcast For that I am sorry. Really the visuals and interplay in your scenes makes me wish you'd get paired with an illustrator you kind of have this style reminds me of published work, aimed for easy reading, but very well made and just... right
Anonymous
3/30/18, 9:54 PM
Great conclusion, awesomely written. Thank you and I look forward to your next story! More of the unaware/clueless theme please!