Recent Comments

3/30/18, 10:03 PM
Ack didn't praisethis enough you attention to setting, specifics, and detail make the entire story POP. The set ups and peices, consideration of wear, the literary/histoical references or allusions and the just right play to the audience. I'm ALMOSt disappointed with some of the brief descriptions of the players BUT you do well and serve the flow of words and narratives and events better where you conserve. Again some great scenes, from the Prior's seduction, Wat's introduction and taking (doing more than one thing for the story at once), the introduction and development of the characters and the 'lore' worldbuilding. All great things. Its so well made I take the good you're doing with just raw ingredients for granted like sitting down to a nice movie or television broadcast For that I am sorry. Really the visuals and interplay in your scenes makes me wish you'd get paired with an illustrator you kind of have this style reminds me of published work, aimed for easy reading, but very well made and just... right
Anonymous
3/30/18, 9:54 PM
Great conclusion, awesomely written. Thank you and I look forward to your next story! More of the unaware/clueless theme please!
Bmax
3/30/18, 8:28 PM
best episode so far.
Bmax
3/30/18, 8:27 PM
loved this episode! Incredible what became of Ash as the Coach took him in so many ways. the red latex/leather body forming and changing material was a great touch. Especially exciting was the way Ash was enslaved/entranced by his lust and subservience. Wow! Love your writing and what ideas you've come up with in all these episodes.
Anonymous
3/30/18, 8:16 PM
Dude I love how all ur Bttm sluts start off straight and masc. and before they know it they're craving dick from their former straight friends. Woof!
Mar 30, 2018
Anonymous
3/30/18, 7:44 PM
more please ? i'd love to see Dane being a top and aggressive to the hunky genie
Anonymous
3/30/18, 6:23 PM
It's hot but very similar to 'when the fantasy comes true'
Anonymous
3/30/18, 5:09 PM
Hot!
Mar 30, 2018
Timet
3/30/18, 1:00 PM
Not a bad start, can't wait to see where it goes
Anonymous
3/30/18, 12:35 PM
Very hot story ... but don't need Zach's balls to know I am what he makes Tim to be :)