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nycboot
3/28/18, 9:20 PM
Belial visited Rafael in chapter 4. From all appearances it seems as if Rafael is on the "good" side - although I wouldn't think that includes intercourse. Despite the white wings, I keep hoping this Rafael is Belial (or a disciple) in disguise. We know the monastery eventually gets destroyed (hence the 19th century couple moving in) yet I hope the monks have a good time until then (maybe they really do set up a Satanic sanctuary?) So many possibilities!
Anonymous
3/28/18, 9:02 PM
Don't have to worry about Michael and Gabriel, but Lucifer never said any thing about Raphael did he? 😇
Mar 26, 2018
Martin
3/28/18, 6:22 PM
I actually asked the author to remove the name from his story, which he did. This way, it's fine with me.
nycboot
3/28/18, 5:46 PM
Bravo! It just keeps getting better and better! I'm surprised however, that since Belial has been in limbo for so long, that Lucifer didn't acknowledge that. Keep it going - it's great !!!
Anonymous
3/28/18, 2:38 PM
Incredible!!!
Anonymous
3/28/18, 1:34 PM
Loved it!!
Anonymous
3/28/18, 1:21 PM
This was phenomenal! Well-written, I think you captured the mundane, but hypnotic nature of a laundromat in the tone of your writing. It really made the whole piece click together and had me rock hard the whole time ;-)
Mar 26, 2018
Anonymous
3/28/18, 12:54 PM
Doesn't this break the rules of using real life celebs?
Anonymous
3/28/18, 9:52 AM
Terrific
Anonymous
3/28/18, 4:52 AM
love the prof story best so far, love smart to dumber, love responsible to less having to think so much, love bro stuff