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3/29/18, 7:36 AM
I guess that wasn't clear! The person is only suggestible for the hour. Any changes remain. The nameless protagonist is the QB still when the hour is up with wimpy Jake as his boyfriend. And thanks for the compliments, guys! Not sure how to do a chapter 2, though. I do like jock take downs, so I will at least continue with that sort of stuff.
Anonymous
3/29/18, 6:50 AM
Nice! Zippered bliss.... What about a part 2 or 3?
3/29/18, 5:31 AM
Please write more. This is great!
Anonymous
3/29/18, 5:00 AM
Can't wait for part two to find out what happened with Leo and how Dustin becomes a new apprentice to Barber Dan.
Anonymous
3/29/18, 4:58 AM
Awesome! Loved it! Chapter 2 maybe? :P
Mar 13, 2018
Anonymous
3/29/18, 4:43 AM
They all graduated from the naval acedemy together? Capt, Lt cmdr, and COB - which is an enlisted sailor. I will continue to read and block their back stories.
Anonymous
3/29/18, 4:10 AM
Hot! Humorous, as well!!
3/29/18, 2:46 AM
Have loved this story for years. Tank's transformation is a fave
Anonymous
3/29/18, 2:43 AM
Fuck yeah!
LongtimeFan
3/29/18, 2:30 AM
Great story! Love the transformation element, especially the mental one. I do have one question, though! At the beginning, our narrator’s uncle tells him that the spell will last “roughly an hour.” Does that mean the person becomes super-suggestible for only one hour, or that all of the magical changes will go away after an hour, too? I hope not! :D