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Anonymous
3/20/18, 11:50 PM
..to the 1800's? ...It's "Fantasy"... I like it. That being said, i do like the literary connection.. A bit more please.. and leave the Scots out of it.. We've had enough shite. Humiliate the English and French all you want.
Anonymous
3/20/18, 10:51 PM
Okay. How does this connect to the late 1800s? That's my question.
nycboot
3/20/18, 9:35 PM
I love this story!! I'd love to see how Belial is able to make the entire priory come under his control so that it's filled with demons and demons-to-be! Love it!! Thank you for sharing your evil fantasies!!!!
Aug 29, 2005
nyjogger4e@aol.com
3/20/18, 8:55 PM
I liked the transition from straight to slut! Nice work!
mgreene70@yahoo.com
3/20/18, 8:34 PM
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Mar 19, 2018
AgainstMyWill
3/20/18, 6:41 PM
Oh man, this pushed so many of my buttons. I would've loved a little more struggle - Robert having flashes and glimpses of his real mind during the mind control and trying to fight his young captor but failing. Such a hot premise and I love the sadistic younger intern.
TSquared
3/20/18, 5:52 PM
This story gets better and better! I love the allusion to the Lewis Chessmen - these little details add so much!
Mar 19, 2018
Anonymous
3/20/18, 4:38 PM
More of Ned and Robert,please
Anonymous
3/20/18, 3:34 PM
Off to a great start More please
3/20/18, 11:18 AM
Cheers! And I do enjoy corniness in stories I read, so I include it in the ones I write, whether it's a paper thin plot, cheesy dialogue or ridiculous costumes. As long as it's done on purpose I think a bit of humour is always fun.