Recent Comments

Mar 13, 2018
LongtimeFan
3/14/18, 3:44 AM
What a phenomenal story! I was hard as soon as the first orders started blasting through. Your descriptions of the minds gradually weakening and eventually switching over was insanely hot. And that final line...chilling. I take it that's the estimated number of men in the world? Great going. :D
Mar 13, 2018
Swizzington
3/14/18, 1:31 AM
If you are interested in some feedback, I would suggest splitting this up into two or three separate chapters. It's really quite long! Just my opinion.
Mar 13, 2018
Anonymous
3/14/18, 1:26 AM
I WILL BECOME!
3/14/18, 12:08 AM
Drone as a noun, an adjective and a verb. Awesome!
Anonymous
3/13/18, 10:16 PM
Excellent!!!
Anonymous
3/13/18, 5:22 PM
Love it!
3/13/18, 5:08 PM
Awesome!!! Cannot wait for more!!!
Weeeee!
3/13/18, 2:49 PM
I like to see some incest between the Dad , Son, and Uncle. Then a foursome including Marco, then an all out orgy.
screamingmoist
3/13/18, 2:24 PM
Thanks for reading! I think I screwed up in linking to the previous stories, but you can find the second chapter (Bear Country) on my story page.
Zai
3/13/18, 1:00 PM
Total turn on! I agree with the other comments about more in depth details, etc., however, this was still an overall 10+ hot as hell short story! Great job and now bow as I applauded and cheer you, dude! As for future wants if you create more superhero stories, would be descriptions of their costumes. I love Superman's, Batman, etc., in their classic looks of skintight spandex and those delicous super skintight, speedo-like briefs they wear. Per example, in this story, instead of the tentacles just shredding Superman's costume, a hot scene would include a tentacle tearing a hole in Superman's briefs on the backside then slamming its way up the man of steels asshole. Also, there needs to be more struggle and forced sex. Nothing like an alpha mega stud superhero like Superman being coerced, forced and raped into gay sex slavery. The same goes for any and all hero studs. I love when Batman gets captured and forced to take cock up his briefs encased ass and down his throat by villains like Joker or Riddler or Penguin. Too hot! Thanks for sharing your visions and talents. You Rock! πŸ˜‰πŸ‘ΏπŸ‘πŸ‘