Recent Comments

screamingmoist
3/13/18, 2:24 PM
Thanks for reading! I think I screwed up in linking to the previous stories, but you can find the second chapter (Bear Country) on my story page.
Zai
3/13/18, 1:00 PM
Total turn on! I agree with the other comments about more in depth details, etc., however, this was still an overall 10+ hot as hell short story! Great job and now bow as I applauded and cheer you, dude! As for future wants if you create more superhero stories, would be descriptions of their costumes. I love Superman's, Batman, etc., in their classic looks of skintight spandex and those delicous super skintight, speedo-like briefs they wear. Per example, in this story, instead of the tentacles just shredding Superman's costume, a hot scene would include a tentacle tearing a hole in Superman's briefs on the backside then slamming its way up the man of steels asshole. Also, there needs to be more struggle and forced sex. Nothing like an alpha mega stud superhero like Superman being coerced, forced and raped into gay sex slavery. The same goes for any and all hero studs. I love when Batman gets captured and forced to take cock up his briefs encased ass and down his throat by villains like Joker or Riddler or Penguin. Too hot! Thanks for sharing your visions and talents. You Rock! πŸ˜‰πŸ‘ΏπŸ‘πŸ‘…
3/13/18, 10:32 AM
Awesome!!!!!
Anonymous
3/13/18, 9:21 AM
It is painful to wait ...
Anonymous
3/13/18, 7:32 AM
Just incredible Great great work
Anonymous
3/13/18, 4:43 AM
So thrilled to see a continuation. Really hope there’s more. Your writing is always top notch!
LongtimeFan
3/13/18, 4:14 AM
What an incredible story! Sexy, full of transformations, and with mystery, tragedy (the scene about the two men being physically unable to feel one another is painful), and horror. Can't wait to see what happens next. :D
Anonymous
3/13/18, 3:52 AM
Detailed, but so hot!!
Anonymous
3/13/18, 3:43 AM
This was one of your best stories. Great tie in to mythology. Very intelligent.
LongtimeFan
3/13/18, 2:20 AM
HellllOOOOO. This is a great continuation! And I like the abrupt endings--sometimes you want a short, sweet, sexy story (and this captures it all...that "I can't...think..." got me hard right away). And I wonder what the "much-awaited" sequel could be? All of your stories are great, so I'd be happy with anything. Keep on writing what YOU want to write!