Recent Comments

Anonymous
3/10/18, 4:44 AM
You always do a wonderful job of setting up the scene and in so many creative ways. The only complaint I have is that it always feels like it ends just before the “real fun begins”. It’s a wonderfully written scenario, but it stops too early. There’s some frotting and oral action, but it feels like it could use a bit more attention and length. Still, I suppose there’s only so many ways you can say “sex is currently happening” without boring your reader.
LongtimeFan
3/10/18, 2:28 AM
Love stories with soundtracks. And sweet mother of GOD, that picture of Tyler at the gym...if there was a professor in my college who looked like that (at 38!), I’d move into his office. ;p
josmiscu75@gmail.com
3/10/18, 12:30 AM
I can't hardly wait for the next chapter. Keep writing them. You are an awesome writer.
Anonymous
3/9/18, 10:28 PM
Excellent from beginning to end Great work
absman420
3/9/18, 10:23 PM
absman420 here! Loved it! But then, you knew I would! Dumbed-down muscleheads? My playground... Always hard at the end of your stories, my friend. Well done.
Jan 26, 2018
Anonymous
3/9/18, 9:58 PM
I kinda want to see how this goes on
Cumluvnbottom@yahoo.com
3/9/18, 7:48 PM
Damn! Nothing like a dominant verbal Top. Great story and very well written.
Anonymous
3/9/18, 6:49 PM
Is this supposed to be social commentary?
Anonymous
3/9/18, 6:34 PM
A shame that others comments made you feel that you had to stop. There should be space in this site for all points of view and all kinks to be written about. Thank you for your contribution Piso.
Anonymous
3/9/18, 6:28 PM
This finale contains everything I thought the others would slowly add. I guess it had to reach a certain level or reprogramming for all the action to begin and quickly reach the levels of the ending. Definitely would love to find such a fitness gym !