Recent Comments

Anonymous
3/8/18, 6:45 AM
Great premise and a good start. I'd love for more detail to be put into both the dumbing down and hypnosis processes in the next installments because they activate my kink like nothing else. Looking forward to reading the rest!
Anonymous
3/8/18, 5:23 AM
Love it so hot bro!!
Anonymous
3/8/18, 2:20 AM
I’m really impressed to learn that you have had a plan towards the conclusion. This one looks quite nicely structured and really hot!! It would be also great that you had a sequel that a protagonist, journalist or detective?, tried to investigate the gym and fought against Seb. You know! He also joined the gym and became one of them :P
D
3/8/18, 2:17 AM
oh man, I kept waiting for Joel and Brad to get into the shower together...fuck all those defiant thoughts away bruh.
Anonymous
3/8/18, 2:14 AM
Oh, interesting approach to depict transformation. I really love it. But, it’s a bit sad that we could not see Lawrence in the end. He is a great and strong device to continue or transit to the next chapter.
Anonymous
3/8/18, 2:14 AM
Oh, interesting approach to depict transformation. I really love it. But, it’s a bit sad that we could not see Lawrence in the end. He is a great and strong device to continue or transit to the next chapter.
Anonymous
3/8/18, 1:58 AM
Another hot masterpiece from you!! Great thanks to you, bro!!!! Can’t wait the next installment as you end quite hot. Hope we would see a muscled Ricky before it ends. Quite a nice gym and I wish I went!
Anonymous
3/8/18, 1:18 AM
Yep, Fin, Nicht, No Mas
tomozco
3/8/18, 12:11 AM
Another hot piece from you, Hypnothrill! It was really exciting and intriguing to read even though there has so far been absolutely no sex happening! Looking forward to the next part to find out what's the ultimate outcome of the guys' transformation. Is it all just Seb's doing...or would there be another mastermind behind all?
The_Supernatural_D
3/7/18, 11:47 PM
Interesting and original, it's got my interest piqued.