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3/8/18, 9:43 PM
Since you asked, he's called Reiichi.
smitty@amtelecom.net
3/8/18, 5:26 PM
good
Anonymous
3/8/18, 5:08 PM
I love twists and turns, and this was a good twist and turn story!!
Anonymous
3/8/18, 1:28 PM
Uuuggh.. That last section turned kind of dark for me. Hot in a way, but dark. It just leaves me feeling that it wasn't a real happy ending and that Brian has a story to be told now. Now I feel Brian needs to somehow overcome Nicholas's control in order to be truly happy. It's like "Christopher, Craig & Co." on mcstories, where a new character's influence changes the rapport that had been established over several chapters!
Anonymous
3/8/18, 11:01 AM
I third (?) the calls for more Meathead stories!
Anonymous
3/8/18, 10:36 AM
I wish we knew the name of the next victim...it’s really hot and amazing to make me feel that way!!
Anonymous
3/8/18, 9:40 AM
This is awesome, Psychologically interesting and character driven in a great way but without losing sight of the kink and sex. Really good writing.
Anonymous
3/8/18, 6:45 AM
Great premise and a good start. I'd love for more detail to be put into both the dumbing down and hypnosis processes in the next installments because they activate my kink like nothing else. Looking forward to reading the rest!
Anonymous
3/8/18, 5:23 AM
Love it so hot bro!!
Anonymous
3/8/18, 2:20 AM
I’m really impressed to learn that you have had a plan towards the conclusion. This one looks quite nicely structured and really hot!! It would be also great that you had a sequel that a protagonist, journalist or detective?, tried to investigate the gym and fought against Seb. You know! He also joined the gym and became one of them :P