Recent Comments

Anonymous
3/7/18, 9:59 PM
Totally loving the way you’re slowly building up the effects of the takeover. Can’t wait to see how it all comes to an end!
Anonymous
3/7/18, 9:43 PM
Another great story! And I second the comment about Meatheadz. It's one of your best. I hope you can finish it one day soon.
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3/7/18, 9:03 PM
BRO...that was awesome. I spend MAYBE 10 hours a week in the gym...i sorta wish I could live there like Nate.
Anonymous
3/7/18, 7:31 PM
Excellent!!! Great story!!
Willie Cici
3/7/18, 7:30 PM
Has this series run its course? Thoughts are welcome.
3/7/18, 4:31 PM
As always a very well written story, thanks a lot. But what's intriguing me most, is "Prom Night" seems like a mix up of your previous two stories, "Web of trust" and "Like Son, Like Father" . If Peter a maestro of finding subjects' weaknesses (or in some way, true desires), Casper is like a amatuer who's still trying to find the correct method to remodel people's mind. Who knows words really matter! Sometimes I feel Peter is so capable that he seems invincible and predictable. In "Prom Night" I get a lot of chances to see how things could go wrong, it's refreshing and interesting. And somewhat I feel Casper and Cedric have some similar characteristic, that good masters maybe have some pervert kink (like Casper insist doing the insect scene), but they care about their subjects' well being. Peter cares too, but not describe as much as the other two. It's always good to see the humanity in chars, make them more relatable and believable. Glad to hear your next project is another "Web of trust ". After seeing Hunter and Kevin( from WoT ch8) are being controlled but still have some liberty to interpret masters' commands (well, not so "slaves"), I always think it's an interesting plot that worth to explore, but maybe difficult to write and make sense, so any new story would be fine to me. Wish you the best!
3/7/18, 4:23 PM
With your warning about the next chapter in mind I have to say I really enjoyed this one. The continued mind cleansing was fun. :)
Anonymous
3/7/18, 4:13 PM
I'm hard!!
Sillyboys
3/7/18, 3:53 PM
I. Want. This. To. Happen. To. Me. So. Badly.
Anonymous
3/7/18, 3:33 PM
Great work!