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AeonFlux
3/6/18, 7:05 PM
Yes..........
D
3/6/18, 5:52 PM
Hot dude. I was expecting it in the music or something. At my gym lots of dudes just leave without showing. How does Seb get those dudes?
AeonFlux
3/6/18, 5:46 PM
I need a second part of this.......
Anonymous
3/6/18, 4:32 PM
Excellent!!!
Anonymous
3/6/18, 3:32 PM
Correction....throwing *other smurfs into the well*, that is.
Anonymous
3/6/18, 3:32 PM
Great start! *“Naw, go ahead, buddy. You can shower first. You haven’t tried the new showers yet, have you? I can tell,” Brad smiled as a faraway look came into his eyes. “You’ll love them.”* Hehe, reminds me of an old Smurfs episode where the village well replaced your old and worn out things with new ones. When one of the smurflings has their doll replaced against her wishes, she and another and Grandpa Smurf go down into the well to look for it. What comes up is....different. Through the rest of the episode they are seen throwing things into the well chanting, "It will be woooonderfulllllll!"
LongtimeFan
3/6/18, 3:25 PM
Fantastic! :D Love the muscle growth and dumbing down. Although I must say...that first picture of Charlie is absolutely amazing. I certainly wouldn’t turn him down. :p
Anonymous
3/6/18, 3:19 PM
Some aspects of the transformed being are erotic but I would not want to be the one transformed in such a way. Being a voyeur to such a 'train wreck' might be enjoyable.
a perverted one
3/6/18, 3:09 PM
Each of the 4 stories had their own hotness to it. The Anvil Bar is the S/m dream bar, the Parump is a role reversal wet dream, Getting a new puppy is a revenge cum true, and Supercomputer is a Geek's dream. I was throbbing with an expanding patch of wetness in my boxers. Well done !
Cliff
3/6/18, 3:03 PM
Thanks for keeping update this story! I can see "Mr. Red" is more complex and kinky than "The Change", especially at this stage, you're trying to use the trio (Craig, Nate and Ash) to describe three different stereotypes. Sometimes I felt it's a little slow and confusing how the story will develop. Intellectually, I know they're all for later revelation of Mr. Red's big plan, and Scribe is your vehicle to uncover the truth. But I guess I would prefer she becomes a recurring char in every chapter, and reveal some new facts about Mr. Red in her perception, so readers can enjoy the sexy human-side story, and the intriguingly detective type gods' side story at the same time, and feeling the story is keeping going in every chapter. This way, it's maybe easier for you to show the world's settings, rather than the narration-style in the chapter 6. It's just my thoughts, please don not feel compelled to do anything you don't want to :)