Recent Comments

Anonymous
3/6/18, 3:19 PM
Some aspects of the transformed being are erotic but I would not want to be the one transformed in such a way. Being a voyeur to such a 'train wreck' might be enjoyable.
a perverted one
3/6/18, 3:09 PM
Each of the 4 stories had their own hotness to it. The Anvil Bar is the S/m dream bar, the Parump is a role reversal wet dream, Getting a new puppy is a revenge cum true, and Supercomputer is a Geek's dream. I was throbbing with an expanding patch of wetness in my boxers. Well done !
Cliff
3/6/18, 3:03 PM
Thanks for keeping update this story! I can see "Mr. Red" is more complex and kinky than "The Change", especially at this stage, you're trying to use the trio (Craig, Nate and Ash) to describe three different stereotypes. Sometimes I felt it's a little slow and confusing how the story will develop. Intellectually, I know they're all for later revelation of Mr. Red's big plan, and Scribe is your vehicle to uncover the truth. But I guess I would prefer she becomes a recurring char in every chapter, and reveal some new facts about Mr. Red in her perception, so readers can enjoy the sexy human-side story, and the intriguingly detective type gods' side story at the same time, and feeling the story is keeping going in every chapter. This way, it's maybe easier for you to show the world's settings, rather than the narration-style in the chapter 6. It's just my thoughts, please don not feel compelled to do anything you don't want to :)
milust
3/6/18, 12:53 PM
I really like the last one.
Anonymous
3/6/18, 10:42 AM
please continue this as a series! I've always loved your mind control/foot fetish stories!
3/6/18, 10:27 AM
It's been a long time since we last read such an interesting story as this one! The plot, the descriptions, the way you go back and forward is very well presented!!! Please do not stop! keep up the good work! I can't wait for the following parts which I hope will be many ;)
Anonymous
3/6/18, 8:33 AM
A real brainwash study! I’m looking forward to the rest of this :)
Anonymous
3/6/18, 8:27 AM
Hot! Would love to read more
3/6/18, 8:18 AM
Yes, this is the end. There's a lot that was removed from this chapter that would probably make good material for a new chapter, if I ever decided to do one, but I have no plans to write anything else at this point. And yeah, I've only seen a few stories where the less physical guy is the Dom, and in most of them, the other guys are uber-jocks. I wanted this one to be more of a normal family with normal guys, even if one of those guys was one of the hottest in the school. :)
UchihaDEMS
3/6/18, 7:19 AM
This kind of mind control and feet? Amazing