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3/1/18, 3:16 AM
This chapter did not disappoint. Keep up the great writing, nice to have you here and would love more.
3/1/18, 3:12 AM
Love the start, can't wait for more. Great pace and descriptions.
Anonymous
3/1/18, 2:12 AM
Hot!
Anonymous
3/1/18, 12:23 AM
What happens next?
2/28/18, 9:45 PM
I understand that it has a bit of a chauvinist vibe to it, but Sandro is set up to be a pretty "traditional" guy so far as stuff like that goes. I suppose a disclaimer of "The plot points and characters in this writing do not necessarily represent those of the writer" might be applicable to this story. Over all, it is detailing with the idea of identity and sense of self based off of information I have been given from the person who's requested the story. Given how the characters personalities have been described to me it seems pretty reasonable for Tom, who has a Male body, and identifies as Male would find having his sense of self randomly flipped extremely uncomfortable and disconcerting. With the idea of Machismo(something that in my opinion, is over all a negative thing) being something this story is exploring, it felt like a logical response for such a character to have. The story doesn't say its right, or makes a plea to move the reader to think that way, just shows one persons reaction to the sudden occurrence. There is nothing shameful about being a Woman, or Trans.
Anonymous
2/28/18, 9:24 PM
This got very chauvinist pretty fast. Why would feeling like a woman be humiliating? I know everyone has their kinks but I would feel bad if any trans person read this—it’s not exactly sensitive to how they may feel.
2/28/18, 8:43 PM
Of course other people in the warehouse could have been affected by the effects of the gas as it dispersed. Perhaps a mass orgy in the changing room!
2/28/18, 8:23 PM
I suspect no one walked in on them during the first round because it's the fumes that matter, and a puddle of liquid can produce a lot of fumes. So most of the warehouse may have been distracted by incidents of their own. And direct application of the liquid is definitely not what it's made for, and it's not intended for repeat exposure. If I can think of some fun consequences of cumulative overexposure to write, there may be more in the future. For now I'm going with the assumption that they'll be happily fucking each other silly for a good long time.
Anonymous
2/28/18, 4:13 PM
This was so sexy! I wonder if the blue liquid might have any long term effects after being applied topically to Caleb's ass....
Anonymous
2/28/18, 4:08 PM
Agree: Piso you write awesomely fucked up and lusty stories. Hope you come back, sorry if assholes ruined this place for you.