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Anonymous
2/25/18, 9:48 AM
I saw this on Instagram and loathe it even more here. The characters are all over the place. How is one supposed to act when a guy continuously smells? The lazy fat slob Caleb DESERVED to be called out on his intentional slothfulness and ultimate meanness.
Anonymous
2/25/18, 8:42 AM
This story is great! Some more detailed for the later section would be nice. I don't think you necessary need a narrative as long as the one shots are descriptive and hot!
Boon
2/25/18, 7:59 AM
I like the idea of a mean guy with good looks, being ruined and spoiled by himself. I'm very curious of where this will go. Do you have some plans for Anthony and Brad too? I hope so! what a bunch of douchebags! I'd love to read how they turn their pastel shirts and boat shorts into stained rags. And about the guy who wrote "Fetishising obesity is absolutely disgusting"... well, just ignore him. Nobody forced him to read it.
Anonymous
2/25/18, 7:57 AM
Hmm hot. Would love a continuation
Anonymous
2/25/18, 5:27 AM
Just didn't get me!
Voodooweaver
2/25/18, 5:02 AM
Really good story, great descriptions. Definitely my cup of tea. Please do share more of these if you have any :)
Anonymous
2/25/18, 3:35 AM
Ah, gotcha man, if it's cool could I email you sometime to chat about this theme? Not too often I see this theme around and would enjoy getting to talk about with with a brilliant writer like yourself. if that's okay.
Anonymous
2/24/18, 11:34 PM
I love love love the twist ending. Did not expect it!!
Anonymous
2/24/18, 11:22 PM
I love love love this story. Awaiting the next chapter.
2/24/18, 9:27 PM
Cheers for the feedback! The Hypno coin may turn up again at some point, he'd clean his room sometime and find it eventually. And dang, I was going for 'wistful look at the future' rather than just rushed anecdotes, but that's something to work on. The changes is this story are very temporary, lasting only as long as they're being looked at through the lenses. Technically they probably even revert every time Rory blinks, but that's too fast to notice. As for a sequel, most of the stories I'm writing at the moment are one shots, in part because I have the idea for the story but no real direction for it. But, if you see something you'd really like to see more of, I welcome suggestions.