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Voodooweaver
2/25/18, 5:02 AM
Really good story, great descriptions. Definitely my cup of tea. Please do share more of these if you have any :)
Anonymous
2/25/18, 3:35 AM
Ah, gotcha man, if it's cool could I email you sometime to chat about this theme? Not too often I see this theme around and would enjoy getting to talk about with with a brilliant writer like yourself. if that's okay.
Anonymous
2/24/18, 11:34 PM
I love love love the twist ending. Did not expect it!!
Anonymous
2/24/18, 11:22 PM
I love love love this story. Awaiting the next chapter.
2/24/18, 9:27 PM
Cheers for the feedback! The Hypno coin may turn up again at some point, he'd clean his room sometime and find it eventually. And dang, I was going for 'wistful look at the future' rather than just rushed anecdotes, but that's something to work on. The changes is this story are very temporary, lasting only as long as they're being looked at through the lenses. Technically they probably even revert every time Rory blinks, but that's too fast to notice. As for a sequel, most of the stories I'm writing at the moment are one shots, in part because I have the idea for the story but no real direction for it. But, if you see something you'd really like to see more of, I welcome suggestions.
Anonymous
2/24/18, 6:46 PM
are the changer permanet or temporary?
Anonymous
2/24/18, 5:20 PM
Great sequel! I would like to see more actions.
2/24/18, 4:20 PM
When I was a kid, my mom convinced me not to order a hypno coin, persuading me that it could be too dangerous. Guess she was right!
Anonymous
2/24/18, 4:04 PM
I would have loved to see more leading up to the choice between the two, to feel a pull at the heartstrings and secretly vote for one or the other. Also, did he pursue a PhD or not? Waaah cliffhangers! 10 outta 10 always!!
Anonymous
2/24/18, 3:41 PM
Love this chapter! Small, subtle plot twist was fun!