Recent Comments

Anonymous
2/20/18, 6:05 PM
LOL straight porn XD, was incredibly hot!
Kevin
2/20/18, 5:15 PM
Good job
Anonymous
2/20/18, 3:45 PM
So cool!! Loved it!!!
2/20/18, 3:25 PM
Oh this was hot. I especially like how he made their lives better. My only thing, why did he have to choose only one. He could have kept both. Hehe
Anonymous
2/20/18, 3:02 PM
Excellent!!
2/20/18, 2:30 PM
Awesome!
Jan 14, 2009
Anonymous
2/20/18, 2:29 PM
I would love for Mark to have survived and where it could lead...
Anonymous
2/20/18, 1:40 PM
hot. please continue
Anonymous
2/20/18, 1:13 PM
hot story. thinking some other kinks, and additions would work nicely into this story
LongtimeFan
2/20/18, 12:47 PM
Hi! This is an EXCELLENT story: I love the descriptions of the gradual brain “washing” (tee hee!), and how you let the reader use their imagination to fill in the gaps of exactly what’s happening. Awesome job! Keep writing! :)