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UchihaDEMS
2/16/18, 10:59 PM
Muy corta lamentablemente, pero aqui te puedo decir un par de detalles que tengas en cuenta, si vas a querer poner lo que ambos personajes estan pensando, te recomiendo escribir en 3ra persona omnisciente, Dejar una línea entre párrafos es muy importante para no cansar la vista, también para diferenciar entre los que hablan.
Cumluvnbottom@yahoo.com
2/16/18, 10:58 PM
Great start. Hoping for more.
Anonymous
2/16/18, 6:06 PM
Thanks I enjoyed it very much <3
Anonymous
2/16/18, 4:32 PM
Thank you so much for this, can't wait to see what you do next <3
Anonymous
2/16/18, 3:56 PM
After reading the whole series including the darker ones, I think I like this one more.
Anonymous
2/16/18, 3:09 PM
Very nice
Jan 29, 2018
Cumluvnbottom@yahoo.com
2/16/18, 2:03 PM
Moral(s) of the story: 1.. Be careful what you wish for (and how you wish for it) 2. No magic can change who you are deep down. Brilliantly done.
Anonymous
2/16/18, 11:07 AM
Hola! Excelente Relato, me encantan tus historias sigue así! Sube más pronto!
mgreene70@yahoo.com
2/16/18, 9:47 AM
Which all goes to prove that 'you can please some of the people some of the time..."