Recent Comments

HyperMuscleMonster
2/13/18, 7:09 PM
Wow, that wrapped up fast! When Axel said the folks in his community wouldn't help, I figured we'd be looking at a 2-man infiltration into Diamond's kingdom. The musk solving everything is almost, yeah, a bit too deus ex machina. I'm sorry if my comments on the last chapter were poorly received, I really did enjoy the story overall, I was just disappointed that the masculinization and mutation elements seemed to fall away in significance. (The line about a "boner killer" was mostly joking around.) I really liked the piercings as a social trend in the mountain community, it seemed to hint at either tribalization of different survivor communities or a further trend of social deviation from the pre-virus baseline. I wish we'd seen more of that kind of expression.
Anonymous
2/13/18, 3:58 PM
I'm really sorry this has ended. What a great series. Loved the feminization aspects too!
2/13/18, 3:26 PM
Concerning your Author's Note: spoken like a true artist of words...sometimes it takes working on another project to spark inspiration on another. Concerning your work: I am a huge fan and you never let me down. Thanks!
ExhibSlut
2/13/18, 2:56 PM
I’m oddly disappointed in the ending. It feels too much like deus ex machina. I thought the hierarchy of musk would have overridden any feelings of love and eventually turned the society into a giant anthill. Darker but more sexually interesting, no? :-)
LongtimeFan
2/13/18, 2:29 PM
Dear M. Green, What a great ending! I do like it when things end happily. :) And this was a fascinating story—you wove an extremely large cast of characters together naturally, made them well-rounded, and looked at the whole picture of what a mutating world might look like. Excellent work! :D
Anonymous
2/13/18, 12:22 PM
Love this story so much! How does the 'zombie' facility work? On musk? Or with the eyes in some way? Totally want see inside. It'd be hot to see some resistance to Diamond's power - but not too much - secretly holding out that he will own Bazz
2/13/18, 11:29 AM
Absman420 here! If the worst criticism of my erotica is that it’s too cerebral, I’m ok. I like to think. I also like to read. No matter how good something is conceptually, if the story’s poorly constructed, it won’t do its job and get me off. Erotica is about mood — can’t have mood without words — so never fear. If there’s one thing I got, it’s words!
M
2/13/18, 8:18 AM
Hey absman. Thank you for your reply. I read and re-read your stories multiple times and while they are cerebral, they make me hard every time. I jerked off often to them. If some people they think they are too cerebral, Tough Shit. Please keep on writing and making it us hard
Anonymous
2/13/18, 7:13 AM
^^ you take yourself far too seriously, ""masculiphile"", femme-phobic, lol ok buddy. I'm not the biggest fan of the feminisation stuff either, but it's the author's story and you're not the only reader. Might not appeal to you, but it does appeal to others. Calling it a "total boner-killer" is unnecessary. Just skip past it like I do. Not that hard.
Anonymous
2/13/18, 6:08 AM
Loving this more and more as it keeps going. The corruption of Neville was so hot. Can't wait for more