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Blindseer0
2/13/18, 8:42 PM
Interesting concept and well written story. On one hand i feel bad for Mick. Saul ruined him once, then uses him a second time and basically takes away his free will. On the other hand, i like the karma that a guy who let his dick define him is now completely controlled by his dick. Definitely feel sorry for Tino though. If i was to continue this (definitely don't have the time) Tino would discover that he can now only cum from Mick's dick, but his cum soothes Mick to a state where he can sort of travel. They start travelling, with issues, and the effect wears off. Mick tops someone, and transforms them, and that person tops Tino, causing him to cum. Before that person can rampage Tino uses his cum on that guy and Mick. Mick is soothed and the other guy is now stablized (mind back and no longer infectious). Tino gets Mick to Saul, Mick tops Saul, and Tino gets the antidote, leaving Saul to be the hyper muscle top with no mind. But that would just be me.
Anonymous
2/13/18, 7:30 PM
continue, please
HyperMuscleMonster
2/13/18, 7:09 PM
Wow, that wrapped up fast! When Axel said the folks in his community wouldn't help, I figured we'd be looking at a 2-man infiltration into Diamond's kingdom. The musk solving everything is almost, yeah, a bit too deus ex machina. I'm sorry if my comments on the last chapter were poorly received, I really did enjoy the story overall, I was just disappointed that the masculinization and mutation elements seemed to fall away in significance. (The line about a "boner killer" was mostly joking around.) I really liked the piercings as a social trend in the mountain community, it seemed to hint at either tribalization of different survivor communities or a further trend of social deviation from the pre-virus baseline. I wish we'd seen more of that kind of expression.
Anonymous
2/13/18, 3:58 PM
I'm really sorry this has ended. What a great series. Loved the feminization aspects too!
2/13/18, 3:26 PM
Concerning your Author's Note: spoken like a true artist of words...sometimes it takes working on another project to spark inspiration on another. Concerning your work: I am a huge fan and you never let me down. Thanks!
ExhibSlut
2/13/18, 2:56 PM
I’m oddly disappointed in the ending. It feels too much like deus ex machina. I thought the hierarchy of musk would have overridden any feelings of love and eventually turned the society into a giant anthill. Darker but more sexually interesting, no? :-)
LongtimeFan
2/13/18, 2:29 PM
Dear M. Green, What a great ending! I do like it when things end happily. :) And this was a fascinating story—you wove an extremely large cast of characters together naturally, made them well-rounded, and looked at the whole picture of what a mutating world might look like. Excellent work! :D
Anonymous
2/13/18, 12:22 PM
Love this story so much! How does the 'zombie' facility work? On musk? Or with the eyes in some way? Totally want see inside. It'd be hot to see some resistance to Diamond's power - but not too much - secretly holding out that he will own Bazz
2/13/18, 11:29 AM
Absman420 here! If the worst criticism of my erotica is that it’s too cerebral, I’m ok. I like to think. I also like to read. No matter how good something is conceptually, if the story’s poorly constructed, it won’t do its job and get me off. Erotica is about mood — can’t have mood without words — so never fear. If there’s one thing I got, it’s words!
M
2/13/18, 8:18 AM
Hey absman. Thank you for your reply. I read and re-read your stories multiple times and while they are cerebral, they make me hard every time. I jerked off often to them. If some people they think they are too cerebral, Tough Shit. Please keep on writing and making it us hard