wow what a heavy plot chapter. Solid narrative even without the sex. Still, looking forward to the sex next chapter ;)

Can't you corrupt him without breaking or stealing antiques?

Thanks for reading everyone! @longtimefan - it seems like they’d be annoyed when someone asks them to do something that they could do for themselves.

Great addition! Not many stories show the conflict in the controller and their desire to fix things Most of the time they are just overcome by the power and darkness and IT makes them unfeeling almighty

What a great continuation of the story! Having read lots of tales of complete surrender to power, it’s interesting to see a character realizing the ramifications of his errors and trying to amend them...while still getting joy out of mind control. Can’t wait to see more. Great job! :)

Hi, all! HypnoCigarBoy: Great story. :D I want to add my two cents to the debate, but I'll start by prefacing with comments other people have made: that everyone has a different type of story they like, the authors are freely sharing their work, and if something makes you uncomfortable, you don't have to read it. That being said, I agree, to a point, with the original commenter's observation about a trend on this site. It's not so much the corruption aspect--like Edlam said, seeing "good" guys act evil or generally unlike their normal selves was a huge part of my erotic awakening. For me personally, it's the "straight to gay" trope that rubs me the wrong way (tee hee). I know that sexuality is hugely mutable and on a wide spectrum (bisexuality, pansexuality, hetero/homoflexibility, etc.), but I do believe that some people are either heterosexual or homosexual (I fall into the latter category), and reading stories about 100% straight people becoming totally, completely gay leaves me a little uncomfortable, especially because, as the original commenter mentions, being made gay is some kind of undesirable punishment or curse. That's not exactly fun to read. In addition to the negative aspect of "gay=something problematic that you don't want," the straight-to-gay stories suggests that sexuality can be CHANGED, and as a gay man, I've heard that argument before in a much scarier context ("straight education camps," for example--"you can change being gay"). I'm all for fluid sexuality, but the notion of having one's sexuality completely altered creeps me out, especially because sexuality can be an important part of a person's being (as it is with mine). As others have said, though, these are works of fantasy, and there's usually some magic/impossible technology (the Re-Educator, Edlam? :p)/comic book alien symbiote doing the altering. But it does raise those thoughts in my head, and they can kind of kill the mood... Those are my thoughts, such as they are. Would love to hear more! (Maybe I'll sign up for the forums and start a discussion there...)

I loved this story and the concept of the cuteification ray. Turning it on a hot, cocky muscle boy or a tough, muscular policeman (or, um, both please?) would be hot. I can just imagine their tight, built bodies inflating and getting cartoonishly muscular (almost balloon like) while the rest of them got younger and cuter and bubblier. All as they’re trying to maintain their serious, masculine personas.

Very interesting, agreed. Jason is quite the schemer, not losing a moment to think how to make the best for himself. I do like this latest addition, though, for that mild cluelessness when he talks about looking forward to the steam room. Looking forward to the next chapter

I love animal transformation stories. Great idea. Great story.

Any idea when the next chp will be out