What a great continuation of the story! Having read lots of tales of complete surrender to power, it’s interesting to see a character realizing the ramifications of his errors and trying to amend them...while still getting joy out of mind control. Can’t wait to see more. Great job! :)

Hi, all! HypnoCigarBoy: Great story. :D I want to add my two cents to the debate, but I'll start by prefacing with comments other people have made: that everyone has a different type of story they like, the authors are freely sharing their work, and if something makes you uncomfortable, you don't have to read it. That being said, I agree, to a point, with the original commenter's observation about a trend on this site. It's not so much the corruption aspect--like Edlam said, seeing "good" guys act evil or generally unlike their normal selves was a huge part of my erotic awakening. For me personally, it's the "straight to gay" trope that rubs me the wrong way (tee hee). I know that sexuality is hugely mutable and on a wide spectrum (bisexuality, pansexuality, hetero/homoflexibility, etc.), but I do believe that some people are either heterosexual or homosexual (I fall into the latter category), and reading stories about 100% straight people becoming totally, completely gay leaves me a little uncomfortable, especially because, as the original commenter mentions, being made gay is some kind of undesirable punishment or curse. That's not exactly fun to read. In addition to the negative aspect of "gay=something problematic that you don't want," the straight-to-gay stories suggests that sexuality can be CHANGED, and as a gay man, I've heard that argument before in a much scarier context ("straight education camps," for example--"you can change being gay"). I'm all for fluid sexuality, but the notion of having one's sexuality completely altered creeps me out, especially because sexuality can be an important part of a person's being (as it is with mine). As others have said, though, these are works of fantasy, and there's usually some magic/impossible technology (the Re-Educator, Edlam? :p)/comic book alien symbiote doing the altering. But it does raise those thoughts in my head, and they can kind of kill the mood... Those are my thoughts, such as they are. Would love to hear more! (Maybe I'll sign up for the forums and start a discussion there...)

I loved this story and the concept of the cuteification ray. Turning it on a hot, cocky muscle boy or a tough, muscular policeman (or, um, both please?) would be hot. I can just imagine their tight, built bodies inflating and getting cartoonishly muscular (almost balloon like) while the rest of them got younger and cuter and bubblier. All as they’re trying to maintain their serious, masculine personas.

Very interesting, agreed. Jason is quite the schemer, not losing a moment to think how to make the best for himself. I do like this latest addition, though, for that mild cluelessness when he talks about looking forward to the steam room. Looking forward to the next chapter

I love animal transformation stories. Great idea. Great story.

Any idea when the next chp will be out

Very good! Jason's resistance is interesting. He apparently remembers enough to try and fight back. Story is getting interesting.

the prior chapter and this one are my favorite chapters, full of sex and mind control, and love how they were oblivious then forced and succumbed... amazing. I really hope you update the series soon with something new, new cards for BDSM like pig, brat, wax, nine tail play, humiliation, nipple play, etc. other SEX acts like double penetration or triple, etc. and other BEHAVIOUR cards that have also been mentioned by others like senpai, that create a "mental" state about another character on the story, dependency or fear, devotion, love, desire, etc. some other CLOTHES too like the super hear genre, or bishoujo, like sailor moon, would you imaging a beefy guy in a skirt or a twink on a skirt?.... I'm dreaming for great things with this storie series so please do update and continue on with the good work.

Thanks very much, Mdlftr. Maybe Martin will have to add an icon/rating for tears? :)

All your chapters have the same problem, they're sexy, smut and fucking hot as hell but you repeat the same formula over and over again, and thou I like it and actually use it many time to jerk off I would LOVE to see you evolve this series into something greater. Adding more into the game, like different cards that change not only the body but the mind, there's not only a twink or top or bottom... there's the behaviours of a pig in BDSM or a brat or present more than the cross, like pulling the nipple piercings, electricity play, a nine tail, etc etc etc... THE WORLD IS THE LIMIT!0