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9/25/24, 3:50 PM
I will say, as inorganic as the dialogue is, I find the scenario quite credible
Anon
9/25/24, 12:42 AM
@Rock Creek Werewolf I think in terms of that duality between wolf and human thought, this is well present. Zachs current situation (and how mondjugen are treated in general) is legitimately terrifying, but I can imagine due to the views that sprung up regarding Luna the wolves think they are doing a good thing. However, I suspect that eventually they are going to get found out. People do go missing, but with a specific process happening all the time? Unless they change that up they will get found out. There's definetly an idea that jinns are a bit different than humans in certain moral aspects- they can overreact to bad situations and misinterpret accidents as purposeful malice if a human does something, and one story I remember has a case where a young jinn possessed a woman who was lonely because they thought that would help them not be sad. But that's more the theological view, but I can see what the trajectory for wolf society is in that light. It's not identical, but similar in some ways but in some cases can be wildly different. There's also the idea jinns could follow human prophets and religions which complicates things further (a Christian, muslim, Jewish, hindu, Buddhist agnostic athiest etc or doing their own thing or following a faith from amongst the jinn is completely possible in a muslim understanding.). But I think that even if wolves see things differently than humans, they aren't so distant that they cannot conceptualize human understandings for things, though they may not fully get it so to speak. My wonder then is how is Yusuf going to handle this conflict. I strongly suspect he's going to find something he knows won't work faith wise (either extremely harsh treatment to a mondjugen or something similar) and he will have to make a choice. But then again, maybe not. We already see some wolves not liking anything related to human faith, but I think Yousef will find a way to reconcile things. He clearly doesn't take his faith likely, and I highly doubt he will leave it. I think in the case of those who follow Luna, it really becomes then what do they want to be. If Luna just is, they have the choice to be more sinister or not. Obviously, the mondjugen aspect will likely always be a bit dubious, but attitudes could vary from group to group. Or if there's a lunarian orthodoxy that exists in regards to wolf teachings. I think for me, Mullins conflict and yousefs faith navigation interest me the most. Eventually, Mullins is going to have face his wife and children as he is not going to leave them, unlike the other fellow. Yousef is likely never going to relinquish his faith either, and even if forced will likely uphold it in secret.

9/25/24, 5:53 AM
@Anon I agree that the need for more mondjugen puts the pack at risk for discovery. But that's also an element of all horror: the fear of discovery. Take an random gay vampire story: death/disappearance of human is inherent even if the writer does not stress it (Pierre and Jacques are enemy vampires... and lovers... oh, and they each kill about 100 people a year to drink their blood and survive. Will their love prevail over their rivalry?). I love the description of the djinn, and will explore that.
9/25/24, 12:09 PM
fucking hot, love seeing massive men submit to their desires, even better when they come caged/handsfree from their muscle pussy

9/25/24, 12:43 PM
@[lmf0001](/user/show/696436) Thanks man. Glad you enjoyed it.
9/25/24, 11:22 AM
Worth the wait! Thanks for writing this!
9/9/24, 9:02 PM
Wow! Another amazing (and quite lengthy--thanks) chapter! As already mentioned, a lot of twists and turns, all of them quite interesting. The background about the Fiends was rather ingenious. I like that their abilities are passed down from generation to generation. And it contained all my favorite things: knock outs, an OTS carry, more mind control. I feel bad for both Kai and Will. They seemed so good together, but now that Kai is under Mikey's spell and Will has been even further brainwashed to be Octavius Fiend's personal slave, will they be able to be reunited? It seems like Will is going to be focused on recapturing Kai and Mikey with the help of Zach. And what a twist to the Fiend family story there. Thanks so much for this excellent installment. As usual, I can't wait to read more!!! :smiley:

9/10/24, 3:04 AM
@[Profguy15](/user/show/920341) Thank _you_ for always taking the time to read and share your thoughts! It's always a pleasure to read them. As for our friends, Will certainly is in a very, very tough spot.. Kai, on the other hand, is at a crossroads. In all fairness, he never really loved Will as more than a friend, it was his reconditioning that made him fall for his best friend. Now that he's free from that, he's been forced to love Mikey. But who knows what his heart truly wants? Time will tell.. And as for the Fiends, there are more secrets to come! :grin:

9/24/24, 8:24 PM
@[SleepyAsh](/user/show/10046846) No pressure, of course. I was just wondering if there was going to be more of this fabulous story soon. I think I'm having withdrawal. :satisfied:

9/24/24, 9:05 PM
@[Profguy15](/user/show/920341) Haha, I'm sorry, I've taken a lot longer to write the new chapter this time. It's already done and waiting for approval, so it should be available in a day or two.

9/25/24, 2:01 AM
@[SleepyAsh](/user/show/10046846) did you notice the Halloween challenge is confirmed 😇😇 hoping for a entry from you

9/25/24, 3:06 AM
@[Glennyboi](/user/show/917433) I'm definitely interested in participating, I only hope I'll have the time. Got lots of stuff happening right now, which is also why it took me so long to finish the next chapter.

9/25/24, 9:40 AM
@[SleepyAsh](/user/show/10046846) Awww no worries. Loving this current story and grateful for your work ☺️
9/25/24, 7:58 AM
Why would the kid let a Medic fuck him. He just fought for him. Now he lets a stranger fuck him when he really needs protection.
9/25/24, 6:44 AM
Archie give it up, he is turning you into nothing. You will never make a college team. He is doing too much damage to your body. Get help, tell the doctor so you can finally get through the withdrawal. Then kick his ass. He can’t go to college with you, so he can’t have sex with you there.
9/25/24, 4:16 AM
Why keep Letting a Rapist get away with torturing a person with a special sexual condition. And his mental abuse is sick as fuck. All these stories are good but the Alpha that blackmails and rapes people and yell at them to tell him he’s the best and call me daddy is crazy. Just to get what he wants out of the deal. A real Alpha is so good at what he does , he doesn’t have to make the person tell him how good he is . He will ask in a normal voice, 1,2, maybe 3 time but no slapping needed. And the people will just come clean with how good he makes them feel. He doesn’t want someone to do, or stay with him by force. Freshman guy needs to go to jail. The doctor too. For doing the exam with someone else there.
9/25/24, 3:59 AM
This was so good I wish there was more.
Anonymous
9/25/24, 3:26 AM
Something about the BB being drugged via the spiked water bottle just seems... off and unsexy. The daddy didn't really come off to me as truly dominant. Idk. Interesting concept overall.