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Blindseer
2/7/18, 7:09 PM
Shit. Meant to say doing something right. Typo from my phone. I appologize.
2/7/18, 6:53 PM
I very strongly disagree that a debate like this means the author is someone doing something wrong...I think that's very false. Getting a debate like this really just means that this story wasn't for someone, they posted their opinion relating to their personal distaste, and others came to profess that this story is, actually, very much to their tastes. To me, it sounds like you're taking the right action in adding stories that are more true to what YOU want...but we are merely pointing out that there's a reason there is a trend in which the 'good guys' are hypnotized to be bad. Because many of us enjoy it and it turns us on. It's a theme that has been used countless times not only here but also in pop culture. My first instances in which I knew I had a hypnosis kink was when I was younger and I LOVED when Superman or the Power Rangers or even the Teenage Mutant Ninja Turtles were hypnotized to do bad things for the villains...I LOVED it then and I LOVE it now. So I guess what I said originally still stands: write what you want to see so that you can see it while continuing to skip the stories you don't personally enjoy. And I'm honestly very excited to read you what you have in store :)
Blindseer
2/7/18, 6:17 PM
Anon 1: Yes, becayse heroes are symbols of good, while villains explicitly hurt others. Its not just with heroes and villain stories, just easier to cross the line because the stakes are higher and they're already metaphors. HypnoCigarBoy: Whick is why i said there was nothing wrong with the kink. Just to keep in mind why it might make people uncomfortable. And as a writer, if your stories, even your erotic ones, don't evoke a response then you're doing somethong wrong. Getting a debate like this shows you're doing something wrong. Edlam: No one told him to change his story, just keep the trend i mentioned in mind. I explicitly said having a kink for evil and bad boys was fine. Yes, mind control does lead to abuse for power, but i personally enjoy the stories where its used for good or decentness wins. Or at least the punishment is karmic. I'm sorry you've gotten grief over your kinks, you shouldn't have. All i wanted to do was point out the trend. As for that story you mentioned, i was already brainstorming it and will actually try to get it written for once.
2/7/18, 4:19 PM
As other pointed out already, it's a site where men are controlled and made to do things they'd never do on their own which, in and of itself would lend itself to making 'good guys' do erotic and sexual things...it's erotic gay mind control not gay boy scout recruitment. That said, if there is a story that you think would be better with a good guy making a bad guy good or something along those lines, write it! Share it! But the requests that authors change their style to suit your needs is tired and old especially because it's a free site with free stories that people can easily skip over if it isn't their cup of tea. As an author that has received grief for my themes and kinks, I feel it's necessary to comment on a fellow authors story and remind those that don't enjoy the themes of any story to either skip it and/or go and write their own and share it with us! Perhaps it will be great and we'll love it!
absman420
2/7/18, 3:57 PM
Thank YOU, Tattcub! I think one of the best ways to learn to write is by writing. The first story I wrote -- "Milk Man" -- was written at the request of a guy I was dating, to explore a fetish of his. I enjoyed creating it so much, others soon followed -- and look what that universe blossomed into! I am really flattered to have been an inspiration of yours! Thank you!!!!
2/7/18, 3:06 PM
One of my all time fave authors and inspirations returns! Great as usual Absman420. You were one of the authors that made me give it a go years back. Thanks for that and thanks for this :-)
Anonymous
2/7/18, 2:16 PM
Be careful what you wish for --- you just might get it! Hot mind and body alterations!
2/7/18, 7:10 AM
It's just a story guys! I have a thing for bad boys, so corrupting a good guy into a bad guy, or something of the sort is just a fetish, not me trying to call gay people bad or anything. Just read the story and jerk off if you like it, no need to go into a debate lol
Anonymous
2/7/18, 6:48 AM
Mind control, in itself, is inherently doubious and often morally wrong. Keep in mind that this is a erotic story site that caters to that specific kink. The whole aspect of erotic mind control is getting the "victim" to do what they normally would never have done on their own accord. And usually that entails to sex because this is mainly an erotic fiction site. That being said, is it wrong that an erotic fiction site to contain many stories that follow the trend of "evil gay characters turning good straight characters gay"? This site is mainly used as a source of entertainment/pleasure, and in this context, it is often not as sexually gratifying if you read a story about a hero that mind control others to do good deeds (although i feel like this concept could totally be explored). I feel that you are asking for too much if you want to enjoy erotic mind control, which literally forces someone to perform an action against their will, be it good or bad, while standing on a moral high ground, and berating writers for following trends. On top of that, writers on this site is providing their stories for free. They are putting in effort to provide entertainment for everyone else without expecting anything in return. I would say they at the very least should get constructive criticism to improve their writing. Instead of negative comments along the lines of "This type of story does not suit my taste" . They might get discouraged in publishing their next work. Remember that this site isnt created solely for you, if you dont enjoy something, it does not mean others dont. If something in the story doesnt sit right with you, you can always move along.
Anonymous
2/7/18, 5:12 AM
Great story!!