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Feb 7, 2018
2/7/18, 9:19 PM
Quite hot. Love the set up of Jason having hypnotiuzed them
Anonymous
2/7/18, 8:21 PM
excellent as always, screamingmoist. Would like to see a follow up where Hank gives in and uses his magic one last time to become just like Kyle so they can be muscle beasts together
2/7/18, 8:06 PM
You really were. I've had a few things published on here too. Similar themes in some areas too. I haven't written for a while and really want to get back in the swing of things. Thanks again
2/7/18, 7:47 PM
No problem at all :)
Anonymous
2/7/18, 7:46 PM
Excellent
Blindseer
2/7/18, 7:09 PM
Shit. Meant to say doing something right. Typo from my phone. I appologize.
2/7/18, 6:53 PM
I very strongly disagree that a debate like this means the author is someone doing something wrong...I think that's very false. Getting a debate like this really just means that this story wasn't for someone, they posted their opinion relating to their personal distaste, and others came to profess that this story is, actually, very much to their tastes. To me, it sounds like you're taking the right action in adding stories that are more true to what YOU want...but we are merely pointing out that there's a reason there is a trend in which the 'good guys' are hypnotized to be bad. Because many of us enjoy it and it turns us on. It's a theme that has been used countless times not only here but also in pop culture. My first instances in which I knew I had a hypnosis kink was when I was younger and I LOVED when Superman or the Power Rangers or even the Teenage Mutant Ninja Turtles were hypnotized to do bad things for the villains...I LOVED it then and I LOVE it now. So I guess what I said originally still stands: write what you want to see so that you can see it while continuing to skip the stories you don't personally enjoy. And I'm honestly very excited to read you what you have in store :)
Blindseer
2/7/18, 6:17 PM
Anon 1: Yes, becayse heroes are symbols of good, while villains explicitly hurt others. Its not just with heroes and villain stories, just easier to cross the line because the stakes are higher and they're already metaphors. HypnoCigarBoy: Whick is why i said there was nothing wrong with the kink. Just to keep in mind why it might make people uncomfortable. And as a writer, if your stories, even your erotic ones, don't evoke a response then you're doing somethong wrong. Getting a debate like this shows you're doing something wrong. Edlam: No one told him to change his story, just keep the trend i mentioned in mind. I explicitly said having a kink for evil and bad boys was fine. Yes, mind control does lead to abuse for power, but i personally enjoy the stories where its used for good or decentness wins. Or at least the punishment is karmic. I'm sorry you've gotten grief over your kinks, you shouldn't have. All i wanted to do was point out the trend. As for that story you mentioned, i was already brainstorming it and will actually try to get it written for once.
2/7/18, 4:19 PM
As other pointed out already, it's a site where men are controlled and made to do things they'd never do on their own which, in and of itself would lend itself to making 'good guys' do erotic and sexual things...it's erotic gay mind control not gay boy scout recruitment. That said, if there is a story that you think would be better with a good guy making a bad guy good or something along those lines, write it! Share it! But the requests that authors change their style to suit your needs is tired and old especially because it's a free site with free stories that people can easily skip over if it isn't their cup of tea. As an author that has received grief for my themes and kinks, I feel it's necessary to comment on a fellow authors story and remind those that don't enjoy the themes of any story to either skip it and/or go and write their own and share it with us! Perhaps it will be great and we'll love it!
absman420
2/7/18, 3:57 PM
Thank YOU, Tattcub! I think one of the best ways to learn to write is by writing. The first story I wrote -- "Milk Man" -- was written at the request of a guy I was dating, to explore a fetish of his. I enjoyed creating it so much, others soon followed -- and look what that universe blossomed into! I am really flattered to have been an inspiration of yours! Thank you!!!!