Recent Comments

2/7/18, 7:10 AM
It's just a story guys! I have a thing for bad boys, so corrupting a good guy into a bad guy, or something of the sort is just a fetish, not me trying to call gay people bad or anything. Just read the story and jerk off if you like it, no need to go into a debate lol
Anonymous
2/7/18, 6:48 AM
Mind control, in itself, is inherently doubious and often morally wrong. Keep in mind that this is a erotic story site that caters to that specific kink. The whole aspect of erotic mind control is getting the "victim" to do what they normally would never have done on their own accord. And usually that entails to sex because this is mainly an erotic fiction site. That being said, is it wrong that an erotic fiction site to contain many stories that follow the trend of "evil gay characters turning good straight characters gay"? This site is mainly used as a source of entertainment/pleasure, and in this context, it is often not as sexually gratifying if you read a story about a hero that mind control others to do good deeds (although i feel like this concept could totally be explored). I feel that you are asking for too much if you want to enjoy erotic mind control, which literally forces someone to perform an action against their will, be it good or bad, while standing on a moral high ground, and berating writers for following trends. On top of that, writers on this site is providing their stories for free. They are putting in effort to provide entertainment for everyone else without expecting anything in return. I would say they at the very least should get constructive criticism to improve their writing. Instead of negative comments along the lines of "This type of story does not suit my taste" . They might get discouraged in publishing their next work. Remember that this site isnt created solely for you, if you dont enjoy something, it does not mean others dont. If something in the story doesnt sit right with you, you can always move along.
Anonymous
2/7/18, 5:12 AM
Great story!!
Anonymous
2/7/18, 4:35 AM
One of the few stories I read start to finish!! Very hot!!!!!
Anonymous
2/7/18, 4:18 AM
A lot of stories on here feature straight guys turned gay by someone who is pretty much never an altruist. Does anything change just because this story has the labels "hero" and "villain"?
Blindseer
2/7/18, 3:52 AM
I agree with the first comment, so hopefully i can explain what i think they meant. Its a common trend in erotic stories, especially in superhero stories, that the hero is explicitly straight and the villain is explicitly gay and turns the hero into his gay slave/villain. While gay sex is the point, its also often coded as evil or perverse, which is common in real life. Its not about one story doing it, its about a trend through many stories. And this author has posted a ton of stories recently that are in line with this. That's not to say that wroting those stories is bad. Evil/corruption are some people's kink, and thats ok. But different people have different experiences and things that throw them out of a story. I personally don't like the trend of evil gay characters, but I'm not going to say its bad to like it. Maybe just keep it in mind in the future that even works of fiction have implications you might not have thought through.
djs
2/7/18, 3:17 AM
loved it ive fantasized about being a nasty dirty pig oink oink
Anonymous
2/7/18, 2:21 AM
will try and take your advice for the next chapter - thanks for the encouragement!
Anonymous
2/7/18, 2:17 AM
No one is protraying being gay as evil. This story is about a gay villian turning a hero into another gay villian. Get over yourself.
Anonymous
2/7/18, 2:08 AM
but this is fantasy. why are you complaining about corruption in a story with obvious corruption themes in the summary?