Recent Comments

Jan 29, 2018
Anonymous
1/31/18, 1:20 PM
I absolutely love the message in the story! That one's personality shapes how other perceive us. Even if he became gay, Alec retained popularity and Lance still remained a lose!
Kyle
1/31/18, 7:46 AM
The Change is one of my favourite series. Excited to see the chance at a reprisal of some of its themes and powers. Great start! Welcome back, Gymmuscle.
Jan 29, 2018
DD
1/31/18, 2:40 AM
Hah, the irony. He got what he wanted, but not what I think he needed to be happy. I suppose karma's at work here; even with his life turned around, Alec's still going off to a prestigious college and met someone regardless.
Anonymous
1/31/18, 2:38 AM
I noticed that too, but, that's not a bad thing if the author is trying to maintain consistency. Now, if it's out of laziness, then that sucks. Story was hot either way.
1/31/18, 2:35 AM
I made the corrections. No matter how many times you read and edit, errors will creep in. And that's a story I've been working on since early December.
Anonymous
1/31/18, 2:22 AM
An interesting story line. There were 2 major flaws in the editing, when Terry gets Johnny to shower with it's not Dutch's ballsack that Johnny is fondling it's Terry's and the final paragraph needs to be gender corrected as Dr Fields is female. It wasn't until the end of the story that the unexplained evening (web) therapy session made sense and the disappointment that there was no detail of it increased. The story is obviously more focused on the mind control aspect and not on the sexuality the story could produce.
honkycatt@gmail.com
1/31/18, 2:15 AM
Agreed! I look forward to seeing where this is going!
UchihaDEMS
1/31/18, 2:15 AM
mind controlled dads, thats why I am here <3
Anonymous
1/30/18, 11:31 PM
Very very good...thanks
Anonymous
1/30/18, 11:31 PM
Loved it