Recent Comments

Anonymous
1/31/18, 2:38 AM
I noticed that too, but, that's not a bad thing if the author is trying to maintain consistency. Now, if it's out of laziness, then that sucks. Story was hot either way.
1/31/18, 2:35 AM
I made the corrections. No matter how many times you read and edit, errors will creep in. And that's a story I've been working on since early December.
Anonymous
1/31/18, 2:22 AM
An interesting story line. There were 2 major flaws in the editing, when Terry gets Johnny to shower with it's not Dutch's ballsack that Johnny is fondling it's Terry's and the final paragraph needs to be gender corrected as Dr Fields is female. It wasn't until the end of the story that the unexplained evening (web) therapy session made sense and the disappointment that there was no detail of it increased. The story is obviously more focused on the mind control aspect and not on the sexuality the story could produce.
honkycatt@gmail.com
1/31/18, 2:15 AM
Agreed! I look forward to seeing where this is going!
UchihaDEMS
1/31/18, 2:15 AM
mind controlled dads, thats why I am here <3
Anonymous
1/30/18, 11:31 PM
Very very good...thanks
Anonymous
1/30/18, 11:31 PM
Loved it
Thetfartist
1/30/18, 11:20 PM
I loved this and want to see it used even more!
Anonymous
1/30/18, 9:53 PM
An interesting start and looking forward to reading the next installments. Also hoping to read more about Mr Red's unique qualities and kinks. Thank you.
Anonymous
1/30/18, 9:40 PM
that kind of dark and morally ambigous, your signature style.