Recent Comments

Anonymous
1/31/18, 8:46 PM
Excellent
Anonymous
1/31/18, 8:37 PM
welcome back Is this in the new universe and are you ever going to make a new story about the hunt for stevies mom?
1/31/18, 8:25 PM
Fixed it. I re-read it backwards to make sure. Old editing trick - you pick up errors when you read the text backwards. It's a mental thing, but it works.
Anonymous
1/31/18, 8:13 PM
I am so excited!
Anonymous
1/31/18, 4:37 PM
One more correction for you. "Dr. Fields ended the call. As he opened Terry’s file" ... "he" needs to be changed to "she".
Anonymous
1/31/18, 4:24 PM
I love this story. It makes me so horny. I wish I were Jockboy each time I m reading.
Jan 29, 2018
Anonymous
1/31/18, 1:20 PM
I absolutely love the message in the story! That one's personality shapes how other perceive us. Even if he became gay, Alec retained popularity and Lance still remained a lose!
Kyle
1/31/18, 7:46 AM
The Change is one of my favourite series. Excited to see the chance at a reprisal of some of its themes and powers. Great start! Welcome back, Gymmuscle.
Jan 29, 2018
DD
1/31/18, 2:40 AM
Hah, the irony. He got what he wanted, but not what I think he needed to be happy. I suppose karma's at work here; even with his life turned around, Alec's still going off to a prestigious college and met someone regardless.
Anonymous
1/31/18, 2:38 AM
I noticed that too, but, that's not a bad thing if the author is trying to maintain consistency. Now, if it's out of laziness, then that sucks. Story was hot either way.