Recent Comments

Thetfartist
1/30/18, 11:20 PM
I loved this and want to see it used even more!
Anonymous
1/30/18, 9:53 PM
An interesting start and looking forward to reading the next installments. Also hoping to read more about Mr Red's unique qualities and kinks. Thank you.
Anonymous
1/30/18, 9:40 PM
that kind of dark and morally ambigous, your signature style.
Anonymous
1/30/18, 8:45 PM
Awesome story..great work
Jan 29, 2018
LongtimeFan
1/30/18, 8:43 PM
Wonderful story! You have a great gift for world-building, and as someone who prefers the transformative/reality-warping aspects of stories to the sex (I find the mental and physical changes the sexy parts), this is great for me all around. :p I also like your characterization of the mysterious old lady—I think she genuinely IS kind, and is teaching Lance a hard lesson. The brothers’ characterizations are nice, too (they’re clearly both flawed, and it’s hard to decide which of them, if either, is “right”). In short, wonderful work! :D
Jan 29, 2018
Anonymous
1/30/18, 8:01 PM
Be careful in what you are wishing for. Even though his wish is completely fulfilled it's not what he had in mind for results. An interesting story. Will be looking for others by this author to read. Thank you.
Jan 29, 2018
1/30/18, 7:48 PM
Wow. This story really hit home. I knew kids like Lance. One in particular was definitely gay and had a thing for me, but I hung with an asshole jock crowd so didn't give him the time of day. Not sure if it's the intention but I still feel for Lance. He's still the 5'7'' little brother who maybe fell into the role of a scapegoat compared to his golden-child brother. It would be hard for anyone to escape that. Pop-pop gets a redemption arc?
Jan 29, 2018
Anonymous
1/30/18, 6:37 PM
An excellent story, wish I had a transformation like that when I was 12. Looking forward to see where the story takes us next. Thank you !
Jan 29, 2018
Anonymous
1/30/18, 5:35 PM
Always liked this one—personality and status changes are the best, especially when they aren’t always the good kind!
Anonymous
1/30/18, 4:11 PM
No it can't