Recent Comments

Anonymous
1/29/18, 6:13 PM
I'm really enjoying this series. Keep up the good work :)
Anonymous
1/29/18, 5:40 PM
I liked this. It certainly has potential :)
Anonymous
1/29/18, 5:12 PM
Loved it. More, please.
1/29/18, 3:29 PM
And even more interesting! I love that you started this one with some sex and domination. For those of us into that, you teased at more with Tyrese’s power of persuasion. Even more so with Bazz’s. And there’s some enlarged genitalia as well. On top of all that, the story’s extremely well written and has kept me guessing what’s going on. Nice work! I can’t wait to read more.
1/29/18, 3:09 PM
And the mystery continues :) I’m excited to see where this goes.
1/29/18, 2:58 PM
Wow. Great start. Definitely has my interest.
Anonymous
1/29/18, 2:21 PM
I love the concept and the first chapter. Also agree with the comments here—more detailed changes would be hotter. Especially if the subject strains a bit more to figure out what’s happening to them. I’d love to see a tough alpha bodybuilder (like Julian Smith) get exposed to this ray. A stern, hyper masculine type getting cute would be fun to think about.
Anonymous
1/29/18, 11:36 AM
Only quibble is that Niamh is a girls name
Anonymous
1/29/18, 11:33 AM
I would love to see what Lucas looks like now
Anonymous
1/29/18, 5:43 AM
hmmm i like it and want more