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Jan 29, 2018
1/30/18, 10:00 AM
More please ....... perfectly written
Jan 29, 2018
Anonymous
1/30/18, 8:43 AM
Excellent
Anonymous
1/30/18, 7:12 AM
Is there a sequel? And I. Liked the "royal cow" idea ;)
Anonymous
1/30/18, 6:54 AM
It can be both.
Anonymous
1/30/18, 5:07 AM
Can hardly wait for part 2 and how his transformation by this barber continues.
1/30/18, 5:00 AM
I will Shadow!
Anonymous
1/30/18, 1:21 AM
Fuck yes, this is what I need. Any time you want to write more, I will be here to read it.
Anonymous
1/30/18, 1:15 AM
I have a overwhelming tit and pec fetish, so this story is unbelievably erotic to me. Mind controls and nipples really do it for me. I definitely hope that it goes on for a while, and there are a number of chapters.
Anonymous
1/29/18, 9:30 PM
Really need the next chapter...
Sillyboys
1/29/18, 8:08 PM
Thanks for the feedback, everyone! I've been working on another, longer story, and I was getting frustrated both with how slow it was coming (I drastically underestimated how difficult it is to write about a subject you want to masturbate to) and whether or not I'd even have the nerve to post on here -- so I wrote this really quickly as a kind of a "now or never" thing. So that's why it's so short and absent of details, 2 problems I hope to deal with in future stories! I shouldn't have called Ray a supervillain -- I don't read the superhero stories on here, so I didn't think of the kind of implications that would have. So, for now, I'm not planning on doing things with actual superheroes. Though, never say never... In future Cuteification Ray stories, I'm gonna try to not follow the same formula. (i.e. "hey, I'm Ray, you're cute now, now we fuck") Ray likes to stay in the shadows or disguise himself as a trusted friend and watch the changes happen without anyone knowing why... He was just particularly horny today ;p