Recent Comments

1/29/18, 2:58 PM
Wow. Great start. Definitely has my interest.
Anonymous
1/29/18, 2:21 PM
I love the concept and the first chapter. Also agree with the comments here—more detailed changes would be hotter. Especially if the subject strains a bit more to figure out what’s happening to them. I’d love to see a tough alpha bodybuilder (like Julian Smith) get exposed to this ray. A stern, hyper masculine type getting cute would be fun to think about.
Anonymous
1/29/18, 11:36 AM
Only quibble is that Niamh is a girls name
Anonymous
1/29/18, 11:33 AM
I would love to see what Lucas looks like now
Anonymous
1/29/18, 5:43 AM
hmmm i like it and want more
Anonymous
1/29/18, 4:46 AM
Can't wait for more tf of men
mgreene70@yahoo.com
1/29/18, 4:33 AM
Yes because the events described occur on the same day from the viewpoint of 4 different characters: Tyrese, Sven, Miles and Bazz.
Anonymous
1/29/18, 4:07 AM
Great!! Hope we’ll see more lesser known protagonists are absorbed!!
Cskowronski@roadrunner.com
1/29/18, 1:48 AM
More more more!!!
Shadow2523
1/28/18, 11:59 PM
You should do a second chapter!!