Recent Comments

Anonymous
1/29/18, 4:07 AM
Great!! Hope we’ll see more lesser known protagonists are absorbed!!
Cskowronski@roadrunner.com
1/29/18, 1:48 AM
More more more!!!
Shadow2523
1/28/18, 11:59 PM
You should do a second chapter!!
Martin
1/28/18, 9:56 PM
Is it intentional, that all chapters are at year 1 day 90?
Anonymous
1/28/18, 9:07 PM
Fantastic, but would improve with longer and more detailed descriptions of the victims after and before to be changed. I hope you make a sequel, would be hot if Ray makes ultra cute sissy versions of butch guys, like cowboys, bikers, cops or construction workers. You said Ray was a supervillain, so would be hot if he makes supercute twinky versions of manly superheroes.
Anonymous
1/28/18, 8:26 PM
Love to see where this story could in another chapter :)
Anonymous
1/28/18, 7:37 PM
Yes, love it - but if you could make it a bit more detailed and longer it would be even better
Anonymous
1/28/18, 7:35 PM
Continue this please
slavethruhypno@yahoo.com
1/28/18, 7:07 PM
Hot. Always good to change in whatever way a Man wants me to change.
trytoknowyou@gmail.com
1/28/18, 6:50 PM
Hot. I'd love a more drawn out TF, but I like the vibe this has!