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Anonymous
1/29/18, 11:33 AM
I would love to see what Lucas looks like now
Anonymous
1/29/18, 5:43 AM
hmmm i like it and want more
Anonymous
1/29/18, 4:46 AM
Can't wait for more tf of men
mgreene70@yahoo.com
1/29/18, 4:33 AM
Yes because the events described occur on the same day from the viewpoint of 4 different characters: Tyrese, Sven, Miles and Bazz.
Anonymous
1/29/18, 4:07 AM
Great!! Hope we’ll see more lesser known protagonists are absorbed!!
Cskowronski@roadrunner.com
1/29/18, 1:48 AM
More more more!!!
Shadow2523
1/28/18, 11:59 PM
You should do a second chapter!!
Martin
1/28/18, 9:56 PM
Is it intentional, that all chapters are at year 1 day 90?
Anonymous
1/28/18, 9:07 PM
Fantastic, but would improve with longer and more detailed descriptions of the victims after and before to be changed. I hope you make a sequel, would be hot if Ray makes ultra cute sissy versions of butch guys, like cowboys, bikers, cops or construction workers. You said Ray was a supervillain, so would be hot if he makes supercute twinky versions of manly superheroes.
Anonymous
1/28/18, 8:26 PM
Love to see where this story could in another chapter :)