Recent Comments

Anonymous
1/27/18, 2:19 AM
intriguing. get to the hot stuff...
Anonymous
1/26/18, 8:35 PM
Has anyone managed to find the other two parts yet?
Jan 26, 2018
Swizzington
1/26/18, 4:31 PM
I kinda wish the kid had put up a just little bit more of a fight. But still, I really enjoyed it!
Jan 26, 2018
1/26/18, 2:01 PM
Such a hot story! You do a great job of describing Kobi's mental transformation.
1/26/18, 6:12 AM
Will there be more? I hope so.
1/26/18, 3:42 AM
Great premise, but there's no dramatic tension. I think the story would work a lot better with third-person narration and a slower pace.
1/26/18, 2:08 AM
Gareth needs to do some more work with another cast and soon!
Anonymous
1/26/18, 1:40 AM
Loved it!!
Bluemohawk
1/26/18, 12:09 AM
Loved it! Impressive, expressive and hot as all kinds of fuck! You are now on my radar as a great writer. Keep it up.
Anonymous
1/25/18, 10:57 PM
For once i would like to see a brainwashed slave twist it so that he became the twisted Master. I don't know how that would work but maybe a guy is brainwashed and the guy didn't realised how twisted the guy was he was brainwashing. He made a nasty top without realising