Recent Comments

1/27/18, 6:31 AM
Thank you for coming back to this story! It's easily in my top 10.
Jan 26, 2018
Anonymous
1/27/18, 6:20 AM
Tkhon* (So sorry! I really do love your work)
Jan 26, 2018
Anonymous
1/27/18, 6:20 AM
The last bits were great. Never stop writing, Thkon
Anonymous
1/27/18, 2:19 AM
intriguing. get to the hot stuff...
Anonymous
1/26/18, 8:35 PM
Has anyone managed to find the other two parts yet?
Jan 26, 2018
Swizzington
1/26/18, 4:31 PM
I kinda wish the kid had put up a just little bit more of a fight. But still, I really enjoyed it!
Jan 26, 2018
1/26/18, 2:01 PM
Such a hot story! You do a great job of describing Kobi's mental transformation.
1/26/18, 6:12 AM
Will there be more? I hope so.
1/26/18, 3:42 AM
Great premise, but there's no dramatic tension. I think the story would work a lot better with third-person narration and a slower pace.
1/26/18, 2:08 AM
Gareth needs to do some more work with another cast and soon!