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Jan 26, 2018
1/26/18, 2:01 PM
Such a hot story! You do a great job of describing Kobi's mental transformation.
1/26/18, 6:12 AM
Will there be more? I hope so.
1/26/18, 3:42 AM
Great premise, but there's no dramatic tension. I think the story would work a lot better with third-person narration and a slower pace.
1/26/18, 2:08 AM
Gareth needs to do some more work with another cast and soon!
Anonymous
1/26/18, 1:40 AM
Loved it!!
Bluemohawk
1/26/18, 12:09 AM
Loved it! Impressive, expressive and hot as all kinds of fuck! You are now on my radar as a great writer. Keep it up.
Anonymous
1/25/18, 10:57 PM
For once i would like to see a brainwashed slave twist it so that he became the twisted Master. I don't know how that would work but maybe a guy is brainwashed and the guy didn't realised how twisted the guy was he was brainwashing. He made a nasty top without realising
1/25/18, 5:55 PM
Such... originality :-)
Anonymous
1/25/18, 4:07 PM
Wow...truly awesome...each chapter was spectacular...thank you
Anonymous
1/25/18, 12:08 PM
Wait, I thought Carlos was supposed to have control of Troy as Nathan promised, not the other way around? Still, a fantastic end to the story! Shame there is nothing more....Though, I am curious as to *how* they "convinced" the *entire* police dept that Troy was a different Troy, with specifically Carlos and Nathan's help.... Maybe a new story series?