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dennis
1/18/18, 12:46 AM
I love all your stories made me hard reading it love it
1/17/18, 11:57 PM
My favorite author with another hit on his hands. So happy this story is finally out to the public! I loved proof reading and assisting in creating this fantastically sexy story with you!
Anonymous
1/17/18, 11:51 PM
Only bone of contention I have is that there is a distinct difference between symbiotic and parasitic, they are NOT synonymous.
Jan 16, 2018
nycboot
1/17/18, 11:35 PM
Hehe, really nice! I always like references to the GSS site and its readers when embedded in the stories. :)
Anonymous
1/17/18, 10:56 PM
Great great work...excellent
M
1/17/18, 10:27 PM
Hot story and premise. Please, it would be cool if you continue!
nycboot
1/17/18, 10:18 PM
I love the idea. Other than stimulating Peter (no need to used trademarked characters), there is no obvious mind-control, but I would hope the symbiote would start exerting itself more strongly in future chapters. For me, the mental struggle between the symbiote and Peter would be the hot aspect of the story. (I suppose whenver the symbiote wanted its way it could resort to stimulating Peter.) Good luck.
1/17/18, 10:13 PM
Bought the book. the reality shifts were great and well described.
Swizzington
1/17/18, 9:15 PM
Interesting.
Anonymous
1/17/18, 7:05 PM
Good, but would've been better if some parts of the story weren't literally copy-pasted from the previous chapter.. :/